Ren'Py Business of Loving [v0.14i] [Dead End Draws]

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Slothi

Slothi

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Feb 20, 2021
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So played what I think is about half of the current game.

I like the characters and setting, though I do feel like the office aspect of the game has a better flow than the police/fastfood plot. The art is a nice change of pace, reminds me of nobodyinparticular's art.

I feel like the day/night cycle is a bit buggy, it doesn't really have a solid flow to why somethings cause the time to shift and others don't.

The love route feels kinda vanilla, which I guess is sorta the point? Still would be nice if it was a little spicier.
Any chance we could get a DP route for patty?

Also I will say beware putting in an underage girl in your game, even if you have no intention of lewding the girl as you will find a certain fan base may cry for it.
 
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DiegoSaintE

DiegoSaintE

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Nov 20, 2017
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Hi guys. Sorry if I missed the post but I am stuck in the path "ask around about Lorraine fired". Who I have to talk to? Thanks!
 
jakek

jakek

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Apr 1, 2018
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deadend God i love your game, i wish you add some simple sound effects just to the animated sex scenes (like a tapping, fleshy and squirt sounds. That would do so much for those who enjoy animated scenes with sound even more. Thank you so much for your effort making this game!
 
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mnkey45457

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Dec 19, 2020
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I have 34/36 of lorraines scenes and 4/5 story scenes and ive bought every outfit. How do I give her the outfits? I've checked everywhere I could think lol. Great game btw, would love more impregnation and pregnancy sex!
 
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Ryu974

Ryu974

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Jun 13, 2017
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Realy nice game, but to bad that we don't have mom pregnancy for the domination route...... Is it even plan for futur update ?
 
MrPortman

MrPortman

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Nov 18, 2019
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Help me please. I'm stuck with Lorraine where she masturbates in bed to the player, but then nothing happens. What to do?
 
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sirviper235

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Bit late but this last build was pretty good honestly. Tho it really didnt need to be split in two and it's ending is a bit weak honestly. I'm not usre if a denegration route is in, haven't palyed it yet if so. But the love is good for the most part, but problems show up around the point where you choose our Goth GF or her mom.

The problem being her art really isn't as good as her mom's is. Her mom might not look it at first, but she actually has a real good desgin and great scenes if few of them. And her mini route kinda feels like it could be expanded. I like the comedic aspect of it alot in how the game just has it played for lauphs. Tho i do feel we need the actual aparment location in the game world/map. ANd for the spank bank to be updated with them as you can't see a bunch of these scenes again if you don't save.

But that's just issue 1.

Issue 2 as said is that her art isn't as good as her mom's is and her scenes feel a bit awkward compared to her mom's as well. Fun tone but just a bit....Less. if you playit you'd understand.

I'd say that really her mom should get an expanded route and we see more of her character in the cheating route and get to know her rather than just be motivated by a boner for her. And Charlotte herself could really use some more scenes or refined art.

Feels a bit like the artists aren't good with young adults like her and theirtrue strenth is in milfs which is fine. As honestly it felt like they had more fun with her mom than Charlotte herself.
 
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deadend

Dead End Draws
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sirviper235 said:
Bit late but this last build was pretty good honestly. Tho it really didnt need to be split in two and it's ending is a bit weak honestly. I'm not usre if a denegration route is in, haven't palyed it yet if so. But the love is good for the most part, but problems show up around the point where you choose our Goth GF or her mom.

The problem being her art really isn't as good as her mom's is. Her mom might not look it at first, but she actually has a real good desgin and great scenes if few of them. And her mini route kinda feels like it could be expanded. I like the comedic aspect of it alot in how the game just has it played for lauphs. Tho i do feel we need the actual aparment location in the game world/map. ANd for the spank bank to be updated with them as you can't see a bunch of these scenes again if you don't save.

But that's just issue 1.

Issue 2 as said is that her art isn't as good as her mom's is and her scenes feel a bit awkward compared to her mom's as well. Fun tone but just a bit....Less. if you playit you'd understand.

I'd say that really her mom should get an expanded route and we see more of her character in the cheating route and get to know her rather than just be motivated by a boner for her. And Charlotte herself could really use some more scenes or refined art.

Feels a bit like the artists aren't good with young adults like her and theirtrue strenth is in milfs which is fine. As honestly it felt like they had more fun with her mom than Charlotte herself.
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Lol you kinda nailed it... Good write up, definitely fair critisim. Charlotte's mom will hopefully be expanded in the future, she was genuinely a last minute addition to fuel the MILF energy I want from Business of Loving haha. Thanks again for the critique, I'll keep these in mind as I continue and fix up some bugs.
 
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