- Nov 4, 2020
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I wonder, is the art yours? It looks like you just select/cut with photoshop ^^'
Also why name the MC in the 2-3 first dialogue if we can change our name later, feels weird (first officer MC is strange too)
Shouldn't Cap'in be written Capt'n ? And Possiden, really? i'm pretty sure there isn't anything preventing using Poseidon's name X)
Do you read your text out and a device translate it in written english? Because it would explain a lot of mistakes in what I read. You should really have someone correct your work. I won't go any further because it's such a hassle but good luckwith your game, I hope it improve withfurther releases
Also why name the MC in the 2-3 first dialogue if we can change our name later, feels weird (first officer MC is strange too)
Shouldn't Cap'in be written Capt'n ? And Possiden, really? i'm pretty sure there isn't anything preventing using Poseidon's name X)
Do you read your text out and a device translate it in written english? Because it would explain a lot of mistakes in what I read. You should really have someone correct your work. I won't go any further because it's such a hassle but good luckwith your game, I hope it improve withfurther releases
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