can someone help me to correct the English of my visual novel ?

[NallelySDLP]

I am creating a visual novel but I need a person to correct some words as I am translating it with deepl.com and like any translator it has flaws.

 

[mannajump]

Hi.
I can help you out if it´s just some words, and not a total re-write.

 

[mikegolden]

Hi, don't know if you're still looking but I can help out where needed.

 

[Battousai006]

Hi, I can help you wiht the translation to english my first language is spanish, if you still need help just contact me

Hola, te puedeo ayudar con la traducion al english mi lenguaje primario es español english es mi segundo lenguaje,
si todavia necesitas ayuda no dudes en contactar me.