VN - Ren'Py - Abandoned - Caravan [v0.0.1] [Tickler]

Good Points
+ We have a lot of animations for a lot of thing. For example when you camp you can see a lot of little animations for giving you feeling of that ambience.
+ For first relase story looks promising but plot and story needs more detailed writing.

Bad Points
- Sex scene animations looks little bit odd, their angle/positions looks weird and unattractive. They need improve.
- Game is abandoned... Which is quite sad, because this game had great potencial and i gave this game 4 star for first release, its just sad...

For The End
It was looking pretty good for first release but it didn't get any update and abandoned... Its just sad...

With a "v0.0.1" build it's likely too early to start giving this game scores, but I do want to leave a review because this game has what I'd call a near-perfect start.
+clear presentation of concept
+full sex scene
+clear display of art quality and quality of animation
+no 'engrish' (though it needs some proofreading)

The fantasy hero type game is a 'tried and true' concept so not much to comment there. Otherwise I'm very happy we're starting of with a halfling and orc rather than elves and pretty mages; an orc that actually looks orcish at that!

My personal hopes for future content is some impreg and bestiality stuff, but if we keep seeing more of main girls I'll stay hooked either way.

Looks promising so far.

Nice Models, good animations, likeable MC.
Interesting Lore, looking forward to many different races (Orc Lady is especially thicc ).
The Map seems big, hopefully a lot of locations to visit.

Keep it up, definitely a game to keep an eye on.

Currently a very straight forward visual novel . No real paths which is to be expected this early in development. I normally avoid 3d visuals for personal reasons as I don't really like a majority of what people use but this one didn't look too bad at a glance.

It has a pretty interesting premise of you actually being half incubus due to your father fucking a succubus or something which sets the porn logic of your goal being to seduce and fuck a bunch of people. Sounds like it's going to have you going to different areas and doing fetch quests or something and finding demon altars to progress the story. Hard to say how complicated the game will be in it's current state as there's only three different times you're offered a menu with options. It could go either way with being simple and not really having many different paths to take or any at all or it could be completely free roaming with you progressing as you see fit.

The 3d models aren't too bad, there are definitely worse ones out there. The most annoying thing I can point out is the fact that it changes images way too much and this could quickly get annoying to watch as it cuts back and forth between characters having an argument. This is more of a nitpick but I imagine some others can feel the same way about something like this. The animation is nice although the animation used at the "action" part of the demo was pretty cheesy and unnecessary. Felt like they were testing animation or something with how out of place it was. Still, the sex animation looks nice and smooth.

Sounds like there arent that many monster races in the game, possibly just goblins and orcs, but won't really know until the game goes further into development. Might be worth keeping an eye out for.