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In serious need of some editing. It feels like the dev made a few minutes of intro, rethought things and changed how that intro started, and then forgot to remove the first version. And repeated that several times, so you get pieces of completely different intros overlapping with each other.
So the main character is running from the cops, ducks into a law firm that's holding interviews, has an "Are you Carter Wells" conversation with the secretary, gets sent in to the interview with Heckett... then has a flashback where he's specifically going to the law firm's building, is running from the cops again but they're in the building, runs into Heckett's office to escape the cops, then has almost the same "Are you Carter Wells" conversation with Heckett that he had with the secretary.
Heckett also repeats the same "Don't waste my time" line before each individual quiz question. Never mind, it looks like he randomly says a line from a short list. Which means he's got a decent chance of repeating the same one before every question. Bad design, just doesn't need to be randomized.
Then right after the quiz the secretary who was standing in the room while you while the whole discussion happened says "he either yelled at you or hired you"- she was right there, she should know exactly what Heckett said.
Next scene MC's on a plane to Harvard to... it's really not clear? He scams a kid out of his school pass and then the scene cuts to the MC getting ready for his first day at the firm, so I'm really not clear what he planned to accomplish at Harvard and whether he succeeded or not.
That's as far as I've got so far but it's just kind of a whirlwind mess.
So the main character is running from the cops, ducks into a law firm that's holding interviews, has an "Are you Carter Wells" conversation with the secretary, gets sent in to the interview with Heckett... then has a flashback where he's specifically going to the law firm's building, is running from the cops again but they're in the building, runs into Heckett's office to escape the cops, then has almost the same "Are you Carter Wells" conversation with Heckett that he had with the secretary.
Then right after the quiz the secretary who was standing in the room while you while the whole discussion happened says "he either yelled at you or hired you"- she was right there, she should know exactly what Heckett said.
Next scene MC's on a plane to Harvard to... it's really not clear? He scams a kid out of his school pass and then the scene cuts to the MC getting ready for his first day at the firm, so I'm really not clear what he planned to accomplish at Harvard and whether he succeeded or not.
That's as far as I've got so far but it's just kind of a whirlwind mess.
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Kuokaman
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So we have a VN version of a TV show. It looks promising, let's hope it won't be linear.
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Akama-Kira
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...I'll keep an eye on that game.thx
Ecchi anime camera angles be like:
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Parody tag is on there now, for those that were worried about it.
That aside, game look decent. The renders are good but the animator needs to ease up on the warm lighting / warm color tones. Contrast and vibrancy are a good thing, my guy.
Also, I like that this VN has an actual logo. Most are just basic text & a questionable font choice. I appreciate the effort there.
That aside, game look decent. The renders are good but the animator needs to ease up on the warm lighting / warm color tones. Contrast and vibrancy are a good thing, my guy.
Also, I like that this VN has an actual logo. Most are just basic text & a questionable font choice. I appreciate the effort there.
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I think his trip to Harvard was to get the badge and do the tour. To then gather intel about the school, and how they acted. Maybe get a few teachers names and such so that he would be more believable if questioned.
Also I never saw suits, so glad i found this first lol.