tseug

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Potential, have small issues:
1) If you skip the entrance and go to the cave and lake cabin first and then go back to the entrance and go in, Holm will already be here and it will look like you already talked to him while waiting for you to call the mayor.
2) The flashlight runs out of batteries very quickly, and sometimes new batteries just disappear as if they never existed after you try to use them.
3) You can't buy anything from the janitor.
 

Joe Steel

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The game has a lot of potential and is well-written, but navigation is difficult to impossible in the hospital and the PC keeps talking about having a flashlight but doesn't have one and so goes insane about ten steps into the hallway maze.

I do like the way the prologue starts in the middle of the story and then fill the player in. Just a couple of nits:
1. The police captain would refer to Casey as "detective," not "agent."
2. The "letter of resign" (besides not reading "resignation") is a letter of termination, not resignation. Just change all references to "resign" into references to being fired. You can still have the player name the PC on the letter, just as an acknowledgement rather than a request.

GL with this. Navigation issues aside (maybe a minimap would help) the interface is clean and user-friendly.
 
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Rustlerman

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The game has a lot of potential and is well-written, but navigation is difficult to impossible in the hospital and the PC keeps talking about having a flashlight but doesn't have one and so goes insane about ten steps into the hallway maze.

I do like the way the prologue starts in the middle of the story and then fill the player in. Just a couple of nits:
1. The police captain would refer to Casey as "detective," not "agent."
2. The "letter of resign" (besides not reading "resignation") is a letter of termination, not resignation. Just change all references to "resign" into references to being fired. You can still have the player name the PC on the letter, just as an acknowledgement rather than a request.

GL with this. Navigation issues aside (maybe a minimap would help) the interface is clean and user-friendly.
Thanks for commenting, I'm glad you like it! My intention with the navigation is to make the hospital feel like a maze haha. I’m planning to add a minimap in the future. As for the flashlight, I'm not sure what you mean — in the game you have a flashlight and you can turn it on or off.

Edit: And thanks for telling me about the narrative error regarding the dismissal, I’ll fix it.
 
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Rustlerman

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Potential, have small issues:
1) If you skip the entrance and go to the cave and lake cabin first and then go back to the entrance and go in, Holm will already be here and it will look like you already talked to him while waiting for you to call the mayor.
2) The flashlight runs out of batteries very quickly, and sometimes new batteries just disappear as if they never existed after you try to use them.
3) You can't buy anything from the janitor.
Thx, I'll fixe it
 
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marciep

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First page goes over the length of a phone screen and isn’t scrollable so it’s unplayable on mobile.
 
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Pilluah

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This looks beautifully made but arn't this kind of ripped off porn html games a bit outdated?
Why would they be? I get why people prefer stuff specificly made for it, but not everyone is attracted to that and AI graphics is still often recognizable as AI, which can even feel creepy. Personally i prefer either certain kind of 2d art (i don't like the shiny skins or unrealistic proportions) or real porn.

Ripped off porn is about the only way atm it can realistically be used. Would be great to see more legitimate use of it though, but especially more hardcore stuff is really hard to get actors and sets for.
 
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Geigi

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Why would they be? I get why people prefer stuff specificly made for it, but not everyone is attracted to that and AI graphics is still often recognizable as AI, which can even feel creepy. Personally i prefer either certain kind of 2d art (i don't like the shiny skins or unrealistic proportions) or real porn.

Ripped off porn is about the only way atm it can realistically be used. Would be great to see more legitimate use of it though, but especially more hardcore stuff is really hard to get actors and sets for.
Because it could be illegal.
 
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My respects for the design and graphics.
It's immediately obvious that a lot of effort, time and nerves were spent on this.
Good luck in further development.)

(Although I think that in porn games the emphasis should be on "porn" and a little on "game", and for everything else if there is time and desire left, but fuck me)
 
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Terakahn

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The framework for something good is here but right now it's kind of just a text based zombie game with little to no adult content. And you can't even engage in sex with enemies which is weird. I figured that would be the whole focus of the game. Not sure where you're going with this but I hope it gets better