HTML - Abandoned - Caught [v0.3] [Weird Duck]

Comic Sans EVERYWHERE!!!!!!!!!!

A solid start but it feels messy. Tidying up the UI and sharpening up the grammar in the dialogue would go a long way to improving the game.

Also not a fan of the colour scheme going on but thats just a personal preference thing.

PS. COMIC SANS EVERYWHERE

The problems we see at this early release can be corrected and changed without much effort, but should be done soon before there's a mountain of content getting in the way.

The major problem is the user interface. It's visually ugly and not clear. I would look at games like Mayor of Mt Pleasant, Become Someone, and Love & Vice to see UI done well. The dialogue is clunky and grammatically incorrect, and just feels weird.

When it comes to selection of models and videos the model selection is good but the video quality is fairly low. If possible I would transition to using composite scenes of porn (like in Big Bad Principal), rather than just inserting whole brazzers scenes.

Shit grammar, railroad pointless play, 10 minutes quick click through, not worth it. Maybe, maybe in the future, but doesn't look promising. Like, this is just a VN, not a game, choices don't seem to matter? Maybe they do but doesn't look like it. Basically just fuck or nah but you still do? IDK, not worth it IMO.

I really liked the game, it's very rare to see a cuckquean. The idea that it was the wife's plan was interesting but I wish it could have a darker path covered in humiliation in which other women and even the husband put the wife down but she still likes it even though she has several negative thoughts about her same. I think it would be a good thing to put on.

[v0.2]
Has potential.

-Story, Originality
You are not the (father!) cuck.
Your wife is one.

-Renders
Good photoes.

-Sound
No music or sounds, but you can probably enable h-sounds in the videos.

-Playability
For now there is 10-20 minutes of content.
No branching paths.
No replayability.

-Performance
Runs like an average html game.

-Bugs
Didn't see any.

-Animations
Videos and pictures.

-Voice Acting
No voices.

-Grammar
Didn't see any mistakes.

-Amount of content
Very little content for now.
Nice plot (Rarely you can see games where your wife is cuck/cuckqueen).
I hope there is more content and some plot.