VN Character design feedback

[SpecialXSauce]

Hi I'm making a Ren'py game and am brand new to Daz. I could use some input on some of the characters. What do you think?

Also how is the lighting? Too strong?

 

[fitgirlbestgirl]

Finally, a NTR game that has you being cucked by not just a black guy, but a bodybuilding dwarf with a monster cock!

I like the girl, but it kind of looks like she has a deformed face, I don't know if it's the angle or something with the hair being in the way, but something looks weird about it.

Chad's hair color is kind of weird and his nipples look freakishly big. Also he has no belly button, did somebody grow him in a lab?

The dwarf is way too ripped, come on. The legs especially look kind of ridiculous. Also not sure about that hairstyle, but maybe he drives a motorcycle. He's missing his belly button as well.

Tyrone's hairstyle straight from the 80s is also kind of weird. And the dick... I would tone it down a bit.

The lighting seems fine to me.

 

[polywog]

The dwarf is way too ripped, come on.

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[SpecialXSauce]

Finally, a NTR game that has you being cucked by not just a black guy, but a bodybuilding dwarf with a monster cock!

I like the girl, but it kind of looks like she has a deformed face, I don't know if it's the angle or something with the hair being in the way, but something looks weird about it.

Chad's hair color is kind of weird and his nipples look freakishly big. Also he has no belly button, did somebody grow him in a lab?

The dwarf is way too ripped, come on. The legs especially look kind of ridiculous. Also not sure about that hairstyle, but maybe he drives a motorcycle. He's missing his belly button as well.

Tyrone's hairstyle straight from the 80s is also kind of weird. And the dick... I would tone it down a bit.

The lighting seems fine to me.

Thanks for the feedback.

 

[Papa Ernie]

They all look fine. There's a uniqueness to them that's consistent between models and that's the important thing. Go for it!

 

[SpecialXSauce]

Made a few tweaks.





This is amanda's face with with/out the bangs in her eyes and no expression. Before she smirking and the lighting was poor making her eyes hidden I think that's what made her face look distorted.



Shorty lost quite a bit of muscle. I wanted the MC to be a bit intimidated by him and find him disgusting at the same time, so I think this is a good compromise without having Shorty look like the hulk.


Tyrone lost an inch off of the python. And new hair.

 

[SpecialXSauce]

They all look fine. There's a uniqueness to them that's consistent between models and that's the important thing. Go for it!

Thanks, I was going for uniqueness. These are the 4 main characters (MC, wife, and two neighbors).

Also thank you for all those art assets that you and others have distributed for the community. They are a great help for someone like me who is just starting out with this.

 

[VRBaka]

Chad's dick is so small. Is it possible IRL?

 

[SpecialXSauce]

Chad's dick is so small. Is it possible IRL?

Its 3.5 in erect according to daz measure tools. Tyrone is 10 and shorty is about 9