VN Ren'Py Cheating Wives Club: A Proof Of Concept

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  • CHOCOLATE!!!

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  • Eh, It looks good but I'm not sure what I am getting into.

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Hmm, sounds like as you go through it, the chapters/stories will be disjointed--as in there will be no coherent sequence or connection to each other--other than the likely theme suggested in the title. I fear that it's going to be a jarring experience as you jump from one set of characters and events to another set of characters with a completely different plot and so forth. If you go back to returning to a previous set of circumstances and characters afterwards, the player has to recall all of that and figure out what was going on again while omitting the chapter(s) s/he read. That seems, hmm, disharmonious.

The two screenshots provided so far in this thread--one in OP and one in post#14--about the project are pretty cool though.
Think of it like a set of short stories. While Chapter 1 might have nothing to do with Chapter 2 but Chapter 3 and 4 might follow the same story and set of characters.
This format allows us to hop around and experience more settings and ideas while still creating cohesive, albeit short, narratives.

It depends who the wifes cheats with, will it be cuck where i have to see from the side how the wife is taken and cant do anything about it or am playing the mc who the wife cheats with ?
Neither or both.
That depends on the chapter and your POV.
I have a question: do we play as a wife or a husband?
And if wife cheats, it doesnt mean that it must be also cuckold theme...
You play as Jasper ;)
Abandoned? :)
In what way?
 
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The renders are looking good and I'm into the hotwife theme. The thing is that I'm not into supernatural or high sci-fi elements in porn games and since we don't know what the plot and transformation were about, I prefer not to pass judgment yet.
You might not like the plot of this VN then. Though the supernatural elements of this VN are less prevalent in concept.
 

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Sorry Heartlessnobody95, I'm so stupid I confused the register date with the post date! xD
I don't like supernatural elements either!
I've not played it, but the render you've posted looks great! ^^
Are you sure you want to make many different paths? I don't know it first-hand, but game developing doesn't seem easy to me! I'd develop one path the best I can, and then see if I could improve the story with other options! My reference is "Student Transfer", that has the longest plot I've seen so far in this kind of games. But there are many people in that team!
PS: maybe you want to find a new nickname if you want to get into game developing? It's hard to change it once people know you with that name! :(
 
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Tataro

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Let me guess:

Omg what a huge BLACK COCK. My husband can't even compare, I have to have it, sorry honey.
Once you go black... 5 minutes later Yeah take it white ho, get blacked, your lineage is now ruined

Honey you love me still even if I'm black only?
Of course sweaty, I only want you to be happy
Thats great, eat the creampie out of my pussy to prove it.

How much of it do I have right?
 
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Si, completely.
Let me guess:

Omg what a huge BLACK COCK. My husband can't even compare, I have to have it, sorry honey.
Once you go black... 5 minutes later Yeah take it white ho, get blacked, your lineage is now ruined

Honey you love me still even if I'm black only?
Of course sweaty, I only want you to be happy
Thats great, eat the creampie out of my pussy to prove it.

How much of it do I have right?
You have 2? out of the 4 chapter endings correct.
Though you are a bit overzealous lol.
NTR is completely avoidable in this game.
Absolutely avoidable.
Opportunities arise for NTR but you can smack them down with a few mouse clicks and button punches.
 
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Tataro

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Si, completely.

You have 2? out of the 4 chapter endings correct.
Though you are a bit overzealous lol.
NTR is completely avoidable in this game.
Absolutely avoidable.
Opportunities arise for NTR but you can smack them down with a few mouse clicks and button punches.
Yes you can refuse to eat shellfish in our shellfish restaurant. Would you like water with that bread?
I don't mind having an NTR game at least you're open about it but the patterns end up the same, no change just because the devs are scared of saying the fabolous N word.

Let me make it 3 out of 4 then. Black baby. Will you raise it with me and be a good cucky father to it lol
 
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Yes you can refuse to eat shellfish in our shellfish restaurant. Would you like water with that bread?
I don't mind having an NTR game at least you're open about it but the patterns end up the same, no change just because the devs are scared of saying the fabolous N word.

Let me make it 3 out of 4 then. Black baby. Will you raise it with me and be a good cucky father to it lol
Not everything will be NTR lol.
It's going to be in chapters so some might not even have an NTR ending and some might be all NTR endings.
Then again its pretty variable so maybe a setup of one NTR ending might create a different story altogether.
Either way Its all up in the air at the moment lol.
So it could change XD
 

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Not everything will be NTR lol.
It's going to be in chapters so some might not even have an NTR ending and some might be all NTR endings.
Then again its pretty variable so maybe a setup of one NTR ending might create a different story altogether.
Either way Its all up in the air at the moment lol.
So it could change XD
Will MC get a huge white dick all the wives/girlfriends/moms of characters who want to cuck you will ride out and comment on how it's a huge white cock bleaching them and removing inferiority from them one cum squirt at a time?
 
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Will MC get a huge white dick all the wives/girlfriends/moms of characters who want to cuck you will ride out and comment on how it's a huge white cock bleaching them and removing inferiority from them one cum squirt at a time?
Possibly ;)
There are more colors in the rainbow lol.

Though lets just say the "MC" has more in common with the Genie than the rest XD
 

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If I remember your game culture shock it also said the same and ended up being an NTR fest.
 
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If I remember your game culture shock it also said the same and ended up being an NTR fest.
Ntr is the faster route but Vanilla is being developed for sure.
I wanted to a a more complex game with CS but CWC is just going to be a collection of short stories as a side project with an amazing artist.
 

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I really liked the renders.. Hope the story is exciting as i prefer NTR. Waiting for the complete chapter.
 
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i foresee culture shock on hold in some weeks and everything abandoned in a couple months
 

desmosome

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I know you guys already have the concept kind of set already but hear me out. I don't think NTR genre works in this format at all. I mean sure, people will still play it if the renders are good and the scenes are sexy, but the meat of NTR is all in the build up. You need to get the players invested in the characters. Show the normal life of these characters. The sweet side. The lovey dovey. Their future plans. The virtuous woman. Then introduce the antagonist. Start with a slow ramp up then transition into a burst of debauchery with a final climax and an epilogue or fallout/outcome. This is the tried and true structure of japanese NTRs and its so... so rare in western games.

Don't get me wrong, the short story structure could be very hot but more in pornhub cuckold video kind of way. Actually.. it sounds like that's excatly what you are going for so more power to you.

After writing all that, it basically became a rant on the subtle differences in NTR/cheating/cuckold haha. Good luck on this project and CS.