Saw this on NG today and left a review there, but thought I'd share my thoughts here as well.
The writing needs a lot of work. Several typos and odd sentence structures make it difficult to digest an already confusing narrative. (Probably translated?) And the dev can't seem to decide if "gods" is capitalized or not. The game loop isn't well explained, although not too hard to figure out, but it isn't very satisfying. I appreciate the reward system and I don't hate the minigames, but the story doesn't seem to flow well with the gameplay. It seems as if there is a poorly written visual novel hidden inside a mediocre sex themed game. I see potential in the premise, and the UI is very well designed. The loading times are variable, but none were too long, just some were longer than others. Overall not very good, but not so bad to make me mad. Just wasted a bit of time. I hope the dev continues to work on it so that it may become more coherent and fun.
The writing needs a lot of work. Several typos and odd sentence structures make it difficult to digest an already confusing narrative. (Probably translated?) And the dev can't seem to decide if "gods" is capitalized or not. The game loop isn't well explained, although not too hard to figure out, but it isn't very satisfying. I appreciate the reward system and I don't hate the minigames, but the story doesn't seem to flow well with the gameplay. It seems as if there is a poorly written visual novel hidden inside a mediocre sex themed game. I see potential in the premise, and the UI is very well designed. The loading times are variable, but none were too long, just some were longer than others. Overall not very good, but not so bad to make me mad. Just wasted a bit of time. I hope the dev continues to work on it so that it may become more coherent and fun.
