Absolutely spectacular looking game that desperately needs LOTS of updates
The Good————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————
It has all the tags I could wish for in a game – Female protag, groping, rape, and a virgin at that. I love the fact it already has branching paths where Cleo has lost her virginity in two different ways—a huge change of scenery compared to the plethora of slowburn games out there that would take years to add sex to the game, if at all.
There is some really nice groping and foreplay which devs seem to have forgotten completely in 2024. I'm hoping to see a lot more molestation, sexual harassment and groping in public places like the bus and alleyways. I would certainly like it if Alex and Dawson returned but this time there is no Dylan to save her.
Cleo is distinct because she's certainty not innocent about sex and not clueless of the lustful nature of the people around her. She fully understands what others see in her, and there are perspective choices where she (as in you) can even choose to take the initiative to indulge in those primal desires.
The Bad————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————
There are only two things I'd like to point out:
1. There is no blood while Cleo is deflowered. It defeats the purpose of virginity if there's no visible difference between the first time and the second or third. Also, Cleo is a ballerina so even the stretching would destroy her hymen.
2. Rape with Sadim (or Salim?) turns from non-consensual into consensual which undermines the impact of the scene.
It defeats the purpose it should've had— which was supposed to be rape but turns into just another sex scene. Both Cleo and Dylan should be devastated in that scene for different reasons, one who just lost her first time to a rapist and the other who's seeing her love interest being taken by someone else... instead it turns into a threesome.
In my opinion, if you're committing to a non-con scene, don't undermine it later by making it consensual. That is called dub-con which isn't compatible with the above.
I think this scene can be easily fixed by a choice whether Cleo starts 'enjoying' or 'continues resisting'. The current existing path would be the enjoyable choice and the other would-be Dylan hits or even kills Salim, hence saving Cleo. This would be a vastly more impactful choice than a threesome.
The Mid————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————
I do love choices in my games, but as years have passed, I've come to understand that creating too many branching paths for each and every outcome becomes utterly tedious, and it is very easy to fall into that trap where the player as well as the dev feels like the game isn't progressing at all.
For now, the game is doing everything right about the choices and each and every outcome is different and leads to completely different consequences. If the dev can keep this up, it would be a masterpiece in no time.