[R-Play tester] Unpaid [CLOSED] A quick (30 mins - 1 hour) testing of a VN, looking for feedback especially regarding the writing

ParkG

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May 12, 2021
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Project:
- Office Rivals, a visual novel that is a part of an anthology, based on doujinshi themes "wholesome" and "vanilla".
- I've been actively developing it in a year, and now the first chapter of this VN is very close to completion. There will be 3 chapters planned in total.


Developer:
-Myself, and this is my 2nd VN

Looking for:
- Playtester with 30 mins - an hour to play through a VN

Employment Type:
- Unpaid

Work commitment:
- Very low level of commitment, as you only have to spend 30 mins to an hour to play through a VN, and afterwards, let me know what you generally think of it.
- You can do it on your own time, and the deadline for feedback is 8th of December 2023.

Preferred method of contact:
- Here via F95zone message should suffice.
- I will send you the download link via F95zone message.

Job Description:
- I'm specifically looking for feedback about the writing, plot and general feel of the characters.
- My main focus is to make players care about the characters and their stories.
- Things I want to avoid: overexplaining (expositions), and confusing wordings.
- Your name will be credited as a "Playtester".

Additional comments:
- This is a test version, so please do not upload it anywhere.

Screenshots:
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