VN - Ren'Py - Clutch Time [v0.1] [Ionnis VN]

Short review since 0.1 wasn't really that long.

Pretty good with lots of potential. I liked the girls although Darcy's face looks a bit weird in some frames, but besides that they're good. We also get a lot of choices even though it's still so early in development, which is always appreciated.

I love sports anime and wish this has some good scenes with the MC demolishing everyone on the court.

One thing that I've noticed being commented before and that I agree is that the MC's face looks very childish. The freckles look good on the girls but it looks a bit off on him, as well as the hair, so I hope he gets a haircut before his classes start.

The game felt very short to me; I hope it doesn't take too long to develop.
But the quality looks great, you have all my support!
I hope the next update focuses a bit more on the story, I feel like I've learned very little.

pretty good for ur first VN.

The graphics are decent, the flashback effects were pretty cool i wont give spoilers on what happened but I enjoyed it.

Really did feel too short I feel like you should have added more content maybe some basketball practice at least where he goes outisde at night and practices or something because it is a basketball game after all.

Not gonna complain about no sex scene in first update since It doesn't work for all games I understand that.

If your project earns u enough money it would be cool to see custom maps, clothing maybe and items.

the english was good but i feel like it was not very smooth at times.



I kinda disliked the intro I think everyone would rather see a hot girl explain the game to them than some guy with a goatee lol but thats not very important.

Also if nothing is entered as the name I suggest you give a default name for the player, u can google that code it will come up