pretty good for ur first VN.
The graphics are decent, the flashback effects were pretty cool i wont give spoilers on what happened but I enjoyed it.
Really did feel too short I feel like you should have added more content maybe some basketball practice at least where he goes outisde at night and practices or something because it is a basketball game after all.
Not gonna complain about no sex scene in first update since It doesn't work for all games I understand that.
If your project earns u enough money it would be cool to see custom maps, clothing maybe and items.
the english was good but i feel like it was not very smooth at times.
I kinda disliked the intro I think everyone would rather see a hot girl explain the game to them than some guy with a goatee lol but thats not very important.
Also if nothing is entered as the name I suggest you give a default name for the player, u can google that code it will come up
