RPGM Colette's NTR Adventure [v0.0.9] [SleepDage]

[Hasselnut]

When I saw that it was already a version 0.0.9 I thought it was a game that had been in development for a while and already had a significant amount of content. After almost an hour of playing and doing exactly the same thing, I realized that the game doesn't even have content for a 0.0.2, besides being extremely boring with average battles that give you few items and experience and item sales (like the silver coin, to restore the FMC armor) with extremely high values. I hope the author/developer improves this so that future subscribers interested in supporting the work end up giving up on it because it's boring. Despite this, the art is of quality and I hope the author/developer doesn't give up and manages to make his game more than just art but also interesting as an RPG (reworking the quantity and values of the items.)

you mistook it for 0.9.0 lol I didn't play it yet but as long as it's less than 0.1 then it should be clear that it's almost just a prototype

 

[Ntrisbettertag]

you mistook it for 0.9.0 lol I didn't play it yet but as long as it's less than 0.1 then it should be clear that it's almost just a prototype

the problem is that each developer has their own way of giving a number to their version of the game, so I thought it would just be a way for the author/developer to say that there is already some progress in the game, even so it is already the second version released of the game here and even so it is not even possible to go out to do missions to defeat monsters in the game (except for the monsters on the left side of the map) which would be essential in an RPG, and it would also be necessary to increase the lust of the FMC with many events, it would also be necessary to know if it is an NTS where the cuckold lets his girlfriend/wife have fun with other men for her own pleasure or an NTR where the girlfriend/wife is corrupted behind the cuckold's back until she becomes the slut of anyone who takes a simple look at her.

 

[Dieyhensam]

The plowing game is so difficult, can anyone give me the full save?

 

[Ntrisbettertag]

I give up, I've been playing for an hour and twenty minutes and nothing happens, Mc and FMC are already level 3 almost 4, FMC's lust is at ~45 and she's already been completely naked about 2 times and all the scenes I saw were the 2 random NPCs in the city assaulting FMC's ass, the scene before entering the city and the scene of the guard groping FMC near the guy who sells coins (both with FMC dressed), is that all there is in the game so far? And if not, what should I do to get new scenes?

 

[fliks]

I give up, I've been playing for an hour and twenty minutes and nothing happens, Mc and FMC are already level 3 almost 4, FMC's lust is at ~45 and she's already been completely naked about 2 times and all the scenes I saw were the 2 random NPCs in the city assaulting FMC's ass, the scene before entering the city and the scene of the guard groping FMC near the guy who sells coins (both with FMC dressed), is that all there is in the game so far? And if not, what should I do to get new scenes?

Read developer notes... There clearly said it's "first peek" what means tech demo

 

[Ntrisbettertag]

Read developer notes... There clearly said it's "first peek" what means tech demo

but according to the change log that the author put in the game there must be at least 2 scenes that I couldn't see, the variant of the entrance to the city and the second scene of the guy who is next to the coin seller.

 

[fliks]

but according to the change log that the author put in the game there must be at least 2 scenes that I couldn't see, the variant of the entrance to the city and the second scene of the guy who is next to the coin seller.

From what I see in the changelog, 2 screnes with a slap on the butt and 3 screnes with a guard (2 during inspection and 1 with 20 corruption), that's all.

 

[Usernamewastaken2022]

When I saw that it was already a version 0.0.9 I thought it was a game that had been in development for a while and already had a significant amount of content. After almost an hour of playing and doing exactly the same thing, I realized that the game doesn't even have content for a 0.0.2, besides being extremely boring with average battles that give you few items and experience and item sales (like the silver coin, to restore the FMC armor) with extremely high values. I hope the author/developer improves this so that future subscribers interested in supporting the work end up giving up on it because it's boring. Despite this, the art is of quality and I hope the author/developer doesn't give up and manages to make his game more than just art but also interesting as an RPG (reworking the quantity and values of the items.)

Whilst I get your points, this is pretty much just a proof of concept, and like you said the naming of the updates depends per creator but the fact that it isn't even a v0.1 means in the vast majority of cases that there is not a lot to it.

I think it would encourage the creator more if you mentioned the things you like and then give some points for improvement instead of ragging on it, saying how boring it is and how disappointed you are, as that just feels demotivating.

your points are fair but it just reads like hate mail

 

[Ntrisbettertag]

Whilst I get your points, this is pretty much just a proof of concept, and like you said the naming of the updates depends per creator but the fact that it isn't even a v0.1 means in the vast majority of cases that there is not a lot to it.

I think it would encourage the creator more if you mentioned the things you like and then give some points for improvement instead of ragging on it, saying how boring it is and how disappointed you are, as that just feels demotivating.

your points are fair but it just reads like hate mail

You're right, it ended up looking like I'm a hater who didn't get attention from my parents who just wanted attention, despite having tried to send constructive criticism I ended up looking like someone unhappy with their own life, so let me try again.

 

[Ntrisbettertag]

Highlights:
•The art is absolutely incredible, this FMC with big ass and boobs is simply unbelievable.
•The game already has a base, now you just need to continue with missions and in the middle of them for some scenes (if I can try to help even more, I would recommend that you use the same method as Futa Family, which for each mission has its own scene that can be seen whenever you do that specific mission.)

Points to improve or add:
•Rebalance the division of items, experience and lust points (if possible, use a progression method, for example: based on the advancement of FMC's lust, interactions give more lust points, as she stops disliking and perhaps even starts to like it, as for items and experience, it can be differentiated by difficulty level, for example, a low-level monster gives little experience and a good amount of low-value items, while a high-level monster gives a lot of experience but few but valuable items.)
•Add scenes to the story (this may seem kind of obvious, but at this point I'm not referring to adult scenes, but scenes about the story so that it gains more depth and foundation, and please don't abuse the text story as it can be tiring.)
•Provide scenes for when FMC is walking around without the MC (something similar to what happens in the headpat game, the name is too long to remember, sorry lol)
•Clarify or divide the story (no I know what you intend, if it is to make a standard NTR where FMC is corrupted behind the MC's back or if it is an NTS where the MC likes to see his wife with other men then clarify this for the players, and if you are going to do both then leave an option so that the players can choose what they want.)

I ended up taking too long, sorry lol.

 

[Usernamewastaken2022]

You're right, it ended up looking like I'm a hater who didn't get attention from my parents who just wanted attention, despite having tried to send constructive criticism I ended up looking like someone unhappy with their own life, so let me try again.

Hahaha I never thought you were THAT bad, but I appreciate that you took my words to heart ^_^

 

[Usernamewastaken2022]

Highlights:
•The art is absolutely incredible, this FMC with big ass and boobs is simply unbelievable.
•The game already has a base, now you just need to continue with missions and in the middle of them for some scenes (if I can try to help even more, I would recommend that you use the same method as Futa Family, which for each mission has its own scene that can be seen whenever you do that specific mission.)

Points to improve or add:
•Rebalance the division of items, experience and lust points (if possible, use a progression method, for example: based on the advancement of FMC's lust, interactions give more lust points, as she stops disliking and perhaps even starts to like it, as for items and experience, it can be differentiated by difficulty level, for example, a low-level monster gives little experience and a good amount of low-value items, while a high-level monster gives a lot of experience but few but valuable items.)
•Add scenes to the story (this may seem kind of obvious, but at this point I'm not referring to adult scenes, but scenes about the story so that it gains more depth and foundation, and please don't abuse the text story as it can be tiring.)
•Provide scenes for when FMC is walking around without the MC (something similar to what happens in the headpat game, the name is too long to remember, sorry lol)
•Clarify or divide the story (no I know what you intend, if it is to make a standard NTR where FMC is corrupted behind the MC's back or if it is an NTS where the MC likes to see his wife with other men then clarify this for the players, and if you are going to do both then leave an option so that the players can choose what they want.)

I ended up taking too long, sorry lol.

good ideas, also nice to see you are a fellow Headpat enjoyer. The mechanic of having the girl get into NTR scenes in the background with the standing art, being able to find them and the way it progresses (more scenes, more erotic scenes, Sana slowly getting naughtier standing art when naked in combat) is amazing.

If the NTR scenes are behind the MC's back I really hope the dev doesn't make it like those games where you *have* to go the recollection room to see it since that breaks the game's flow imo, kinda makes me go "why not just unlock all scenes to begin with if I have to watch it in the recollection room anyways" (e.g. the NTR scenes in SIGNALIS)

Also I haven't actually tried the game yet but does it have combat H? If it does I'd suggest doing the Headpat / TechnoBrake way where the combat H happens behind the MC or just out of sight as that makes it 'out of sight' whilst still making it in his face if you get what I mean.

The artystyle is amazing, that alone makes this game worth it

 

[Usernamewastaken2022]

Okay I actually played the demo now.
First of all: great first impression! It looks like it has a bunch of mechanics that I really love to see in these games (armor break, lust meter, ability to make girl roam, and from what I read most likely combat H).

I don't really have any criticism, but I do have some bugs/issues.

-The leaves in the starting zone are physical objects, meaning they just block you for no reason, I'd suggest making these so you can just walk over/through them, since they're decorative it just feels annoying to get blocked for no reason.
-The sword animation seems to go in the wrong order where it hits before you do the swinging animation.
-The armor break doesn't seem to get updated until you do the sword swing animation, you could maybe fix this by playing an armor-break animation, you could even use the fully nude standing art as it already has this "oh no it broke" vibe, maybe just adjust it to have some clothes on, or if you wanna save time you could just take the full nude image, make it black so it is a silhouette and use that for the break animation, since having to redraw 3 variants of that pose is a lot of work for something you only see flash for a second.
-Letting Colette roam on day 1 before going to the city / talking to guardsman just soft-locks you until you go to sleep (which it didn't let me do at first, 2nd try it let me sleep though and continue with no problem) so maybe just disable that option on day 1, or make it so you get forced into the next zone the first time.

This is more of a preference but maybe make Colette looks more embarrassed/shy in the armor break variations, she does have a bit of a shy look but it'd be more erotic imo if she looked more flustered, maybe even making her face shaded/hidden à la NTR.
(And maybe add like a text reaction when you exit combat of the MC mentioning Collette's armor being broken, just adds a little spice)

I've drawn a conceptual version of what I mean (pardon the crude art, especially the 3rd one with its poor shading, I am by no means an artist and I use MS Paint rofl).
Also I'm not trying to tell you how to do your art/game so feel free to reject the idea(s).