RPGM - Colette's NTR Adventure [v0.1.1B] [SleepDage]

glad to see games are using depictions of the female character doing things on their own. I would like to see more diversity in the art but its good no.

the gameplay is pretty good, but not too much to comment on since there isnt a lot in the game at the moment. but i do like this game and have high hopes for the dev.

art is great story is really funny really wish the devs doesnt abandon it and keeps going on with story so far recommended and good luck on the project!

will follow and watch it for further updates if things go steady will certainly sub

Version 0.1.1B

Pros
+ Nice artwork
+ Good ideas for mechanics with the options for her to wander, stay at home, or work at home, and good attempt at using erotic combat mechanics.

Cons
- Very early stages and has barely any content despite multiple updates
- Unpolished stuff such as colettes armour not updating during the battles where you lose armour hit points. Only after battle does it visually update.
- Same thing with slash animation not matching visually to current state of armour
- Wandering ntr events cannot be found in a physical location


Neutral
-- Story is serviceable but barebones.


Very overrated for what it offers. Score might improve if further updates are substantial but it is unlikely to.

Score: 2.5/5

Game is very promising. Hopefully we can add pubic hair for her in the future.
Otherwise, excellent animation/art. I really can't say anything else since the game is still in early developement but considering it's early stage it looks solid.

Still really new so I can't full give a 5 out of 5 but a 4 for how solid it is in this early state. Got a good hint on how the mechanics will play out, with corruption and armor break.

The design for Colette is fantastic, maybe not directly shortstack but definitely gives off that vibe, just generally a really cute/toony design.

A lot of promise, can't wait to see more

As it stands currently it is a very promising alpha version.
The character is thick which you either love or hate. It has corruption which makes the game more interesting to play, gives it nice progression and pairs really well with the NTR aspect.

The first animation feels a bit lackluster, and I wish that combat was quicker and that Colette didn't 100% block combat H after the first time until corruption increases, maybe make it like 50%.

It has its flaws but it's only a V0.1 so I think it's too soon to focus on the negatives unless they are actually game-breaking or ruining the story.

also: please fix the armor break art not updating until you use the swing and the fact that you hit before the swing animation instead of after

Easily a 1 out of 5. I don't see any potential, and the passive-aggressive way the dev begs for money is EXTREMELY greedy and offputting.

He begs for money at every damn opportunity, always saying stuff like: "Due to lack of funding, this area is not completed."
Dude, go work a normal job and work on this as your damn hobby, or at least release a real game before demanding money.

Also, there is an object in the game that sparkles and is essentially just an aggressive way of demanding a donation. Even tries to make you feel bad.

Really creepy.

Okay, enough about the begging; let's review the game. If the game is good, all can be forgiven.

Art: The art is inspired, and unique. Is it good? No. It's mediocre. The proportions are way off, the face does not fit the personality of the FC, and the tiny, minuscule amount of art in the game is just meh.
2 / 5

Story: Shittiest generic story I have ever read. Beyond hope. It's blatantly dumb, stupid, nonsensical. Even for a damn RPG maker game. Most MTL translated JP games make more sense than this one. 1 / 5

Writing: Average, shit, low effort. Not the worst, but nothing stands out Some extra lore, some people might care about. 2.5 / 5

Gameplay: ABSOLUTE GARBAGE. The game and system are LAGGY AF. You fight against deers using a damn ATTACK SPAM fighting style, with unfinished combat. Also, you can't even spam attack because the FC has no attack, but you have to use "Slash" instead, which is tedious AF. This is the WORST, ABSOLUTE WORST RPG maker mechanic I have ever seen. This would have been shit 30 years ago. Absolute peak trash. 0/5

So overall? 1 / 5 - I can't say a single good thing about the game. I tried to like it, but it's just that bad. I am sorry! This is coming from someone who actually wasted a good amount of time on it.

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Played the new update because I want to update my Review:

Armor still lasts WAY TOO LONG
Battles are still insanely shitty, it's a joke. SLOW CLUNKY JUST ATTACK ATTACK ATTACK - DESPITE LVL UPS!
Animations with full armor are shown despite Colette having no or broken armor.
No event/reaction even when she's walking around naked.....
Even when she is naked, her sprite avatar on the map is shown wearing armor. Lazy you did not even bother with the details.
Enkis use Armor to break even when Colette is naked. Sometimes, 3 times repeatedly. BAD CODING. You can improve the damn AI. Did you even bother with it?
When battles start, the custom battle track is delayed, and the original track plays for a split second.The H scene with the male Enki makes no sense... absolutely! also that's not what I'd consider "pinning down". Also it's so hard to even get pinned down, and even when you do get pinned down there is a large chance that Colette just escapes... Man this design. Out of 10 tries the Enki succeeded ONCE. ONCE!
If you sleep with damn broken armor you get a game over, nah also getting it WITH clothes. Dev you suck at this whole process.

This is the WORST GAME I HAVE EVER SEEN. SOMEHOW IT'S GOTTEN EVEN WORSE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Many things to say about this game, even in pre beta versions you can see the quality of the artist's draw, that's an important part of many HRPGM just playing this took me back to games like Karryns Prision or Amazon's games and of course the tags are my favorites so for me is a 10/10 hope to see more of it worth to put the money on it

The art for Colette is really good especially on the destruction of her armor and her combat animation. This is clearly the first version of the game as the content is limited 3 scenes with a guard check, naked guard check and naked blacksmith chat, all using basically the same CG’s. I would rate the game higher but in it's current state it does have a number of noticeable issues.

There are a number of bugs and other issue I have encountered;

• Clipping thought the tress and walls south of your house,
• Game crashed when first entering the blacksmith if Colette is naked but was clothed when first talking to the guard,
• Minor grammar and spelling errors,
• Having to click the bed twice to enable first sleep,
• Having to sleep twice to restore MC’s HP

Other notes/suggestions:

• I’m not sure why you need 2 types of currency, especially when one resets each day,
• Not being able to restore Colette’s HP outside of feeding her food make combat quite annoying especially with bad RNG
• Not having a way to toggle Colette’s character model when she’s following you makes navigating more annoying that it needs to be

The premise of the game is quite promising coupled with great artwork; I really look forward to what the dev does with this game.

In my opinion, it has good potential. I like the design of the protagonist, and I also enjoy the mechanic where she loses her clothes during combat. I hope the NTR focuses more on humans and is the kind where the protagonist doesn’t know about it. I’m not a big fan of protagonists who enjoy being cheated on

Muy buen juego,las mecánica de la ropa es muy interesante,el arte de la mujer es muy bonito y su diseño inusual(me encanto)
La historia en este tipo de juegos no es muy relevante al final así que se agradece una historia fluida y dinámica
Espero próximas actualizaciones porque considero que tiene mucho potencial y estoy ansioso de ver hasta donde llega
Espero que en el futuro hayan mecánicas con la granja y pudo haber sido problema de mi dispositivo pero note cierto "lag" después de usar la cama para dormir un par de veces


ENG Translation of Review:

Very good game, the clothing mechanics are very interesting, the art of the woman is very pretty and her design is unusual (I loved it) The story in this type of games is not very relevant in the end so a fluid and dynamic story is appreciated. I look forward to future updates because I consider that it has a lot of potential and I am eager to see how far it goes. I hope that in the future there are mechanics with the farm and it could have been a problem with my device but I noticed some "lag" after using the bed to sleep a couple of times.

this game Colette's Adventure has a lot of potential. This game has a very simple story at the moment but with further development I can see it branching out to a variety of different and fun scenarios.