Not sure if the phone doesn't properly update when if you changed someone to have a personality, they don't seem to keep it on subsequent conversations.
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Before the two of you can talk more about the phone, Rachel interrupts.
Kayla might've agreed to the insanity of a demonic alliance orgy,
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Wedding seduce both, erase groom, fertility, groom asks if she feels better. Also it has MC fucking his landlady where at the top it mentions the groom alive, and at the bottom is dead.
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Mid fucking the bride I think after threatening and then choosing blue it always jumps to Shelly and then back to bride. Seems like it should stay Bride.
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Choices having "pull out of her" and the next one being "pull out of her instead" Why not just reference the names? Seems like it would be easier.
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Some passages are also a bit weird, like choosing "Take care of this once and for all" in Nadir, if you take her as a lover it both mentions you are exhausted from a fight that didn't happen and that ward also dealt with. Then it mentions about her kicking out her husband. Also it never says what happens to the husband.
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I do think the game needs a good once over to make sure everything links up properly and makes sense with whatever the play has chosen. Could also use that time to make some things that are the same no matter the choice to be different. Mainly some sex scenes and their accompanying images, or character personalities.
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Minor suggestion in the phone area, have little icons to represent birth control or pregnant, etc. So people can figure things out at a glance. Also having small profile pics next to the characters who aren't important enough to be on main page next to their blurbs.