VN Ren'Py College of Mysteria [v0.1] [HappySteveGames]

[xXwankerXx]

Netorase and Netori for sure

NTS is coming, its 0.1, you can't rush ntr/nts

NTR, if added will be avoidable. Because whether it happens or not is going to be based on player choices.

So basically, a simple but very controversial and divisive win-all-or-lose-all scenario. I don't know... not saying you can't do whatever you think it's best for your game, that is and will always be your decision to make, but try to take into account the fact that a story focused on both Netori (MC does all the cucking) and (potential) NTR (MC gets cucked and humiliated left and right) sounds like a lot of hard work bound to get you a lot of complaining in the long run and it's not something most players would believe it can succeed, for a lot of valid reasons, the most important ones being the small updates on both paths, the way the women, especially the LIs, are perceived by the players and the way the MC acts for both paths to make sense storywise. Just a slightly different opinion to what it was already posted by other users on this topic.

Take what I said with a grain of salt, and feel free to ignore it if you don't agree with me. The only thing I do think you're forced to do is to be completely honest and upfront about the direction of the story now so everybody can decide whether they like it and will stick around for more or move on to other titles.

Best of luck !!

This game is pure Netori/cuckqueen content actually and dev is even not sure if he should do any Netorare content at all, so tag Netorare here is improper.

Yeah, it's really weird to see an actual Netori game go down the full NTR path for whatever reasons, but there already were a few hints in the story suggesting this'll happen in the next updates, so it is what it is. It's the dev's decision to make if he wants that type of content in his game or not. We can only accept it and enjoy playing the game how it is or ignore it and move on.

 

[HappySteveGames]

Many games that are set to add netorase or netorare content in the future still carry the NTR tag, even though that content hasn't been included yet.

This i know, and why it was there originally. But multiple people were taking issue with it already. So I figure it's not worth the hassle of having an NTR debate pop up every 10 posts.

Though I realise I'm just going to get the flipside, "Where's the NTR tag, this game is clearly NTR!".

 

[HappySteveGames]

Bug: The speaker’s name on the dialogue box is incorrectly displayed as "Suzy" instead of "Grace."

Completely overlooked that, she only has like 2 lines total so didn't think about changing her name.

Critique:
Sometimes the storytelling switches from a first-person perspective to a third-person one, which reduces the sense of immersion, making it feel like the MC is a third party

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I initially wrote in Third Person Distant POV, but decided first person was better. I'll comb through every his/him/he, that should fix it.

 

[Enlight432]

This i know, and why it was there originally. But multiple people were taking issue with it already. So I figure it's not worth the hassle of having an NTR debate pop up every 10 posts.

Though I realise I'm just going to get the flipside, "Where's the NTR tag, this game is clearly NTR!".

Yes, so you’re aware that many people who just search the NTR tag aren’t aware of this game. Then I’ll definitely introduce this game to my friends and write a five-star review because it truly deserves it, especially for the story and the relationship between the MC and FMC

Only the final animation wasn’t well done, especially the facial expression of the FMC. It didn’t look like she was actually engaged in sex

 

[HappySteveGames]

Only the final animation wasn’t well done, especially the facial expression of the FMC. It didn’t look like she was actually engaged in sex

I was waiting for someone to comment on that. That was basically me briefly messing around with 2d animation, to get a basic idea for it. I'm leaning on replacing it with a still image, or doing a series of cut up images similar to the tailorshop scene. The cut up style scene is very easy to do by the nature of how AI generates images, arguably easier than getting a good 16:9:1920x1080 image.

I always knew it looked a little off, but I figure it's better to leave it in than not. But, it might be a case where it's too off.

 

[Enlight432]

I was waiting for someone to comment on that. That was basically me briefly messing around with 2d animation, to get a basic idea for it. I'm leaning on replacing it with a still image, or doing a series of cut up images similar to the tailorshop scene. The cut up style scene is very easy to do by the nature of how AI generates images, arguably easier than getting a good 16:9:1920x1080 image.

I always knew it looked a little off, but I figure it's better to leave it in than not. But, it might be a case where it's too off.

I wrote my review, but something came to mind. If you think it’s appropriate, you might consider adjusting the overview. When I first visited the initial page for this game on F95 and saw only a few simple words about it, my first thought was that this game might not be serious and could just be non-stop porn. Others might also feel this way on their first visit to the page and may not feel inclined to give it a test
Good luck! I’m eagerly looking forward to the next update

 

[SamuraiFruitPunch88]

My poor man Will only wants to have a calm life with the cows and chickens but noooo, bitches be ruining his dreams...Great game by the way, looking forward to it.

 

[Diegoz]

thank you

 

[BlasKyau]

most Likely yes, no promises though. NTR, if added will be avoidable. Because whether it happens or not is going to be based on player choices.

In my opinion it should be very easy and clear how to avoid NTR if it is included. My preferred way is to disable it at the start of the game and not even know it exists.

 

[Lupiscanis]

This i know, and why it was there originally. But multiple people were taking issue with it already. So I figure it's not worth the hassle of having an NTR debate pop up every 10 posts.

Complain to the forum devs, it's their rule.

https://f95zone.to/threads/game-uploading-rules-2024-02-29.524/

Section 2,Point 7 -

Please ensure games are properly tagged, tags should only include content that is currently in the game. You can find a list of tags

You must be registered to see the links

. The Genres section can include more specific tags/genres/fetishes.

Subsection 2 of this rule also states :

Developers can add future tags under the Genre section and identified as Planned Tags.

So you're free to add a 'planned tags' section, just don't tag the actual game incorrectly.

 

[giorgyo777]

this game will definitely be a big success, incredibly beautiful hero models and background locations!)))
the script is also very good, I really wish that before any of the NTR/NTS content starts, MC and FMC would strengthen their love affair before that, otherwise there won't be that thrill, even though I'm a big fan of NTR/NTS, I wouldn't like too long or too fast development of events, the golden mean is important here, but I really want to see NTR/NTS here at the moment when there will be a peak of love between the main characters)))

keep it up developer, really looking forward to NTR!)))

 

[manjarateman]

This was a great first release! Quite a fair amount of content and very well done, I'm usually still wary when it comes to AI Art in these games but a few relatively new games have made me more willing to give it a chance more and this one is definitely going in that same direction because the art looked great, especially for a 0.1 version.

For my two cents on the planned tags discussion, as a fan of NTS I'm definitely more interested in the game leaning in that direction (at least as a well developed route I mean, of course It's always cool to also have a more vanilla route), for the NTR one I'm a bit more on the fence mostly because they end up overshadowing the NTS routes and either or replacing them entirely, plus it would mean a bigger bulk of work for each update to progress on all routes so it can end up backfiring a lot. Having said that, with the promising start I think that as long as dev keeps going for what they have planned it will be fine.

Keep up the good work dev! Looking forward to the next updates!

 

[KasuganoSakura]

following

 

[Nimbus Commando]

This sounds like cuckqueen or netori based, just hope it does not go the classic old pathetic cuck MC route since netori and cuckqueen is so damn rare.

 

[MrDude1977]

IMO Having a NTR and a Non NTR path is a lot of work and people that does not like NTR and people that like it Both will complain, an update for most dev's take months to come out any way then when you do NTR one update then doing an update with out it, it will take forever to get the content you want to play. Say it takes 3 months per update and you focus on one path at a time, the player will end up waiting 6 months for the content they want to see, or you focus on both paths at same time then your content will take longer to come out or we only get 5 min of gameplay depending on the content you want to see. Having 2 paths so different from each other is a bad idea.

 

[giorgyo777]

IMO Having a NTR and a Non NTR path is a lot of work and people that does not like NTR and people that like it Both will complain, an update for most dev's take months to come out any way then when you do NTR one update then doing an update with out it, it will take forever to get the content you want to play. Say it takes 3 months per update and you focus on one path at a time, the player will end up waiting 6 months for the content they want to see, or you focus on both paths at same time then your content will take longer to come out or we only get 5 min of gameplay depending on the content you want to see. Having 2 paths so different from each other is a bad idea.

You're talking such nonsense now...
the presence of NTR doesn't complicate or increase the update time, so just say that you don't like NTR and you can walk away from here!)

 

[HappySteveGames]

IMO Having a NTR and a Non NTR path is a lot of work and people that does not like NTR and people that like it Both will complain, an update for most dev's take months to come out any way then when you do NTR one update then doing an update with out it, it will take forever to get the content you want to play. Say it takes 3 months per update and you focus on one path at a time, the player will end up waiting 6 months for the content they want to see, or you focus on both paths at same time then your content will take longer to come out or we only get 5 min of gameplay depending on the content you want to see. Having 2 paths so different from each other is a bad idea.

I get what you're saying, but it is what it is. There will likely be updates that that will naturally focus on specific routes or characters that people aren't interested in. For instance, the next update is focusing heavily on Audrey(Shy ginger teacher).

Another thing I'd like to add, I don't want to set a concrete time because I need to get more of a feel of how much content I can push at my pace. But updates are likely not going to take 3 months, I think I'm going to be doing more frequent but smaller.

For instance I've finished most the the writing and CG for 2/3 of the major scenes for the next update. I also still need to get a feel of what is a good sized update to time taken ratio, before I can figure out a schedule.

 

[kristo0086]

most Likely yes, no promises though. NTR, if added will be avoidable. Because whether it happens or not is going to be based on player choices.

Will the girlfriend also sleep with other guys? Netorase ?

 

[giorgyo777]

Will the girlfriend also sleep with other guys? Netorase ?

Yeeessssss!!!!;;