VN Ren'Py College of Mysteria [v0.2] [HappySteveGames]

[Grumpy Gorilla]

Great update, it's gaining momentum. Audrey is a hot treat, peeling back her innocence is fun to watch. Really looking forward to more content

 

[whf]

Wow, that was fast. Second update and saves are already broken, you have to start new game and 90% of texts read are as if they weren't read (so I can either use skip unread text and fastforward through it, or replay the game from the start to not miss anything changed). Can anyone confirm, that content of the first version is unchanged (except grammar fixes and such)?

 

[HappySteveGames]

Wow, that was fast. Second update and saves are already broken, you have to start new game and 90% of texts read are as if they weren't read (so I can either use skip unread text and fastforward through it, or replay the game from the start to not miss anything changed). Can anyone confirm, that content of the first version is unchanged (except grammar fixes and such)?

You can safely skip the 0.1 content. It's just grammar and some cg fixes.

 

[goulet1995]

You can stop Cindy from fucking other guys. You're not stopping all the LI's, most of them have partners and some of them will still have sex with their partners.

Also there is going to be a decent amount of girls coming that I haven't shown. A fox girl, a demon girl, a goth girl(Cindy's roommate). Another younger vampire girl, (actually dhampir), and an elf. I'd do a goblin but I'm pretty sure patreon would view that as loli so I won't. And that's just what I've planned so far.

Also as if it's not obvious, the school will move location. So more girls in new and old locations.

My point is, with so many girls. A good portion of them being in relationships, they're going to be fucking other people.

will the girls that have partners be shown or talked about in sexual scenarios with their partners? For me i am fine with the aspect of it beeing common sense that they did things but if there visuals/dialog about it likely woudnt be for me.

 

[Illustrivity]

I agree that the transition from "shy farm people" to "dominating sex fiends" is a bit too quick, but it doesn't bother me too much, to be honest. Bring on the depravity!

Also, Audrey (and her spontaneous behaviour) was hot as fuck. I hope content with the roommate's wife and the lord's son's fiance (the redhead who assaults MC) are also shortly in order. Especially the dickhead lord's son's fiance. Revenge is always the best part of these kinds of stories. Also, I can't wait for Cindy to get actual scenes with other guys (not just teasing).

 

[HappySteveGames]

On the minus side:
- Spelling. I found 15+ spelling errors, and two hardcoded names (will) within first 20 minutes of playing.
- Consistent style of images. I know it is tricky to have consistent faces and style using AI, but a little more effort could have been spent. But for starting out it's good enough and it is a craft you can improve.
- MC behavior. He goes from innocent farm hand to horny sexfiend very fast, and without us as players seeing the transformation in his thoughts and values. Could have been visualized better.

I removed the remaining Will's and combed through for more spelling/grammar errors. Was kind of an issue when your MC's name is the same as a commonly used word, made it tricky to just search and replace.
I'm going to look into getting a grammar checker plugin or something so I don't miss glaring errors in the script.

About consistency. AI it's very finicky and iterative, I'm constantly figuring out how to improve it. I could likely go back through and tinker with every image to bring them all into the same style. Which I have done already for some simpler character cg's. I figured it wasn't going to be worth the effort when I can instead focus on future content and take what I've learned into that.

Big part of why some of the scenes look different is simply because it's stuff I made months ago, vs stuff I've done recently. Some image were literally made in sd 1.5 about 6 months ago.

Although if there is particularly off looking CG, I'd like to know which. I need outside perspective for that kind of stuff. On a particularly productive day I've done over a thousand individual image generations which can really skew your perspective.

 

[User_68P]

If there is a tool that can correct the spelling mistakes it's probably worth getting, it just makes it better

Regarding images, I fully agree with you on the choice to focus on future content. That surely adds more interested people.
I had to play it through again to just to be more specific, and it was not that much that I reacted upon in a second viewing.
The taylor's daughter, the image on the frontpage here on f95 is the one where I felt it turned too much anime.
So in retrospect, not a very big minus


I like that you have some choices. Hopefully you have the inspiration to have a few paths without getting bogged down.

Maybe get a discord running - there are normally a lot of people that like to help out with bugs and errors - while trying to corrupt you into their specific interpretation of NTR/NTS/Sharing/hotwife

 

[kcoope89]

Looks promising, hope dev sticks with this