VN Ren'Py Onhold College Stories: My Girlfriend Is Too Naive!!! [v0.21] [LeetW]

[shotzpro]

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I totally get your point of view, but if you can see my, it could honestly be the difference between having 100 patrons and hitting 5,000. You don't even have to cut anything, just save that part for much later down the line. Since you're still at the early stages, it's the perfect time to set things up right. Later, making big changes would be almost impossible, and if you decide to remake things halfway through, you'd risk losing a lot of followers. People might even think you're just milking the project.


Your game has incredible potential it reminds me a lot of My New Girlfriend, Moonripe Lake, and Blurring the Walls. You just need to restructure the intro a bit and leave the rest as it is. If you give more focus to NTS (since it's trending right now) and save the NTR stuff for later, it would flow so much better. Also, the MC’s friend could be way more than just 'the guy who steals the girlfriend', there's a ton of potential to build something deeper there. There's a real lack of NTS stories with a solid school life vibe, and you have the perfect shot to fill that space

 

[shotzpro]

I hope that from the reviews and the feedback on the first few pages, you can see that what's really killing the interest and making people quit before getting to the good parts is the AI video scene. Hold that back and save it for the end of the game. Start with a strong school-themed intro, introduce the characters properly, and you’ll see that your game will naturally grow a lot in view

 

[N3termia]

add NTR then we can talk

 

[Ser Lordypants]

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Those scenes aren't bad, they just throw off the pacing. You went from 10 to 0. They never really fit the title either. More "my girlfriend is an instant whore" than "my girlfriend is too naive."

You sort of fixed it with the ai thing. But real scenes are always better than fake videos or dream sequences. Not going that far of course. Not yet anyway. But a few people seeing her skirt ride up in class? That would've been a simple enough intro.

On another note, this was a 2 month wait for like 8 ai generated images. Rough. Is that the speed we should expect going forward?

 

[NuShadow]

I don't have a problem with the CG, but man the dialogues and plot, it looks like it was written by a 14yo virgin. There is no corruption, from naive to slut in 60 seconds. Maybe if she already had developed a taste for cock from her boyfriend and he couldn't keep up or couldn't satisfy her then that would make more sense .. after forcing to waste the players time with random text and shit if he chooses to not believe this is really a college (guess if plot holes you can always add filler ) . Hope you get better at writing man and clean up those tags cause there's no build up for the corrupting tag to make sense.

 

[Pr0GamerJohnny]

eh I enjoyed it overall, and I generally dont like anime style stuff. I thought the pacing was fine, the fake video plot twist was nice.

 

[JenMistress]

So, decided to go with 2 sets of saves, one for NTR, the other for NTS, so I could see both routes. Really finding this game very interesting thus far. Thank you so very much for this, and totally looking forward for more!!!

 

[LeetW]

On another note, this was a 2 month wait for like 8 ai generated images. Rough. Is that the speed we should expect going forward?

Not so long for next updates, I hope, but I will not give you false expectations. Ideally is 3-5 weeks for the update. This is now my hobby and I have a lot of stuff to do in real life, so sadly I can't maintain a fast pace of development for now
From start I tried to keep up in 2 week phases, but I didn't last long with weeks almost without sleep

 

[Aspira]

Update when?

 

[Neonviolet]

Does this game have nts sex in the current version ?

 

[QuiteQuiet]

Does this game have nts sex in the current version ?

No. Only the daydream and AI video.

 

[KasuganoSakura]

any news for the next update?

 

[flexer211298]

Not so long for next updates, I hope, but I will not give you false expectations. Ideally is 3-5 weeks for the update. This is now my hobby and I have a lot of stuff to do in real life, so sadly I can't maintain a fast pace of development for now
From start I tried to keep up in 2 week phases, but I didn't last long with weeks almost without sleep

Any news of the update? expected day or something?

 

[LeetW]

any news for the next update?

Hi, friend! Sorry, I'm making a pause with development for now. Made a post on Boosty and Patreon explaining why. So sadly, now even I don't know yet

 

[QuiteQuiet]

Game needs "On Hold" tag.

Hi, brothers and sisters!

Well, it took some time for me to gain courage to write this post. I know many of you who joined my journey for the last half of a year are waiting for new updates and anouncements of game development. But sadly, today I'm writing post just to anounce the opposite - I'm making a pause for now.

And I'm writing it mainly for 2 purposes - first is not stealing your money in anticipation and second is to answer all the questions about release dates.

Also I should answer the upcoming 2 questions - "Why?" and "For how long?"

First is "Why?" - not going to lie - now I just need to do other things. Mainly is my main work, which tooks more time recently and secondly is my second hobby to which I began to devote more time. And I just had to choose what I must sacrifice for now - and I chose game development. The last update was really difficult for me to produce - physically and mentally.

Second is "For how long?" - truth here is I don't know yet. I hope I will return when I will switch my job for a more suitable one and have more free time and stability in life.

Well, that's all for now. Thanks all who supported me and I apologize to everyone who feels like I let him down.

P.S. : I don't wanna give you false hopes, but not gonna lie either: maybe you will see some small updates from time to time when I'll have time to make them.

Peace, people☮

 

[Joshy92]

This dev has my respect for being open and honest. He could have just ghosted everyone like so many, but he didn't.

Thank you for making the game dev and even if it never comes back I wish you luck with whatever you choose to do next.

 

[torakun-1234]

+1

 

[KasuganoSakura]

what's with the abandoned tag

 

[QuiteQuiet]

what's with the abandoned tag

Beats me. I even quoted the dev's patreon post proving they're not leaving the game, just pausing development.

 

[LeetW]

Game needs "On Hold" tag.

Thanks! Yes, I didn't know which one to put correctly to show that work is not currently being done. Changed the tag