Update 12/27/2021 My final Revision unless something unforeseen happens.
I've lost all interest in this game as of the present update.
Watching a girl get a bit slutty is fun turning into a meat puppet or cum dump isn't. Just went to far for my taste.
It doesn't take any creativity to go this route.
There are 80,000,000 more interesting things one can do with a character than take this path.
Update 10/8/2021
This used to be my favorite game in development.
On the good side of it he has reduced the grind some by adding in changes to events. It's not much but it makes a difference.
Broken Story
The same plot issues still persist and have gotten worse with the intensity of her sluttyness.
There are a few factors we need to look at.
First, we know she isn’t an out right slut from the start or we wouldn’t have the story of her lowering her inhibitions. You can see that in her original nature as well she is more concerned with comfort than appearance of attraction.
There are two primary factors that are introduced into the game to explain her moving down the path. First, is exploration of exhibition. That doesn’t explain her wanting to fuck everything in sight or even being willing to do so. The second is money.
Let’s look at money. None of her jobs really have the increase in pay she needs to pay for tuition or would explain her being willing to have sex. Since the school has never told her how much of a discount those jobs are giving her there is no way she would in any universe agree to that.
She isn’t a moron. The game makes that point several times. It points out academically she is doing well when she talks to the administration of the school.
Probably the biggest problem is with her dialog. It doesn’t reflect the change in personality to make you think this actually the path she would go.
To Fix these issues.
The first thing I would do is flesh-out exactly what the school is giving her for the jobs. 10K or so for each of those given her tuition is 50K would be a good start.
Second, fix the pay at each of those business to a reasonable level.
You can always add in expenses and loss factors into the game to reduce what a player has.
Honestly, her path into MMF is far to fast given she isn’t to professional porn or any crap. The only way to explain the current crap is she was a closet slut to start. You didn’t give us that and if you did it wouldn’t really be a story a slut becoming more slutty isn’t note worthy. The girl next door is what you gave us becomes a slut.
Honestly, you had a lot more steps in between where you currently are at and were it came from. The exhibition route had a lot more to explore. Nudist beach. Getting used to public exposure, there are all sorts of jobs she could have gotten before going to strip. Working as a topless barista, nude maid service, you had a massage parlor in the game a job there would have been good.
Playing this game feels like when a little kid counts and goes 1,2,3,4, 10 you know when they skip a bunch of numbers because they don’t want to wait. Or a child’s account of the year, January, February, Christmas.
Then you are going to have to change her dialog to reflect she is no longer the girl next door. Because once she has become that slutty well they no longer are.
Old review below this point
There is a lot to like about this game. There is plenty of content in the game. Graphics are on par. However the game isn't complete yet.
The good:
There is a lot of content. The graphics are par for the course they aren't super but they work and give you what is needed. Story or plot: I guess technically you could say that it is simply following a young lady over a short period of her life while she changes during that time. You won't get board playing the game.
The bad:
The truth is you have really few actual choices you make in the game that are real either you select certain options or the story doesn't progress. In short you could take all those out and you wouldn't loose anything.
In short it's another one of the stories the author over uses "I really have no choice" way to often.
Plot issues:
Various events don't seem to make a lot of sense in the order they happen. She is perfectly willing to post nudes of herself online she took in public but then she has issues with taking a partial nude set in a studio? There are a good number of these types of issues if you pay attention to that stuff.
Jobs: The purpose given for leaving most jobs is for better pay but that is almost never the case.
She accepts the alternative school plans without ever knowing how much it will reduce her 50,000 debt.
Repetition/Grinding:
There is a lot of repetition / grinding in a way. It's not near as bad as some games. Most things are repeated in a manor 3 to 5 times. Some things you repeat a lot more so that you can move things along faster. If you got to a job for example you will work it 3 to 5 times and then your clothes get changed. You however have different events around the maps to increase lust which will help trigger other events so you want to hit those pretty much every day.
But the fact is this game isn't complete and I'm looking forward to see where it heads.
