HTML Abandoned Community [v0.0.3] [Hessai]

[Project Hess]

Overview:
You are a freshman at Northeast Community College, who already hates it. But the only person who can make you happy is your childhood best friend, Zoey. Who is a geek like you. You two decide to enjoy a weekend together to set aside schoolwork and just have fun.
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Updated: 10.1.2017
Developer/Publisher: Hessai
Censorship: No
Version: 0.0.3
OS: Windows, Browser-based
Language: English
Genre: Text-based, Interactive Fiction, Romance, Humor, Male Protagonist

Installation:
Extract "Community.html" and double click on it.

Change-Log:

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Developers note: I rushed a little bit of development so I could get a good chunk of content released. There may be some grammar errors which will be fixed in later releases.

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[griffor]

i enjoyed it can't wait for next update, can i get back button as you progress though?

 

[Project Hess]

i enjoyed it can't wait for next update, can i get back button as you progress though?

I'll see what I can do! I'm new to Twine so I don't know all of it just yet.

 

[Hercule_Poirot]

Congratulations for your first html game!
Having in mind that you are telling the story in first person, you should fix this part:

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Otherwise it looks as if there was a random guy in your room and she suddenly decided to hug him.

 

[Project Hess]

Congratulations for your first html game!
Having in mind that you are telling the story in first person, you should fix this part

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Thanks! And yeah, sometimes I accidentally write stuff in third person when I try doing it in first person. I'll fix that for sure, thanks for pointing it out.

 

[Hercule_Poirot]

Ohh and at some point there was an odd phrasing. "the man inside of you" XD (you can be a man, but also be a creep , however, being a man doesn't necessarily mean that you are a gentleman) , it'd probably sound better if you exchange that word for "gentleman" or "conscience".

 

[Project Hess]

Ohh and at some point there was an odd phrasing. "the man inside of you" XD (you can be a man, but also be a creep , however, being a man doesn't necessarily mean that you are a gentleman) , it'd probably sound better if you exchange that word for "gentleman" or "conscience".

Ah, I'll make sure to change then! Thank you for the help!

 

[Hercule_Poirot]

At this point it probably seems I'm being overly critical, but the naughty bits of your story come out of nowhere. Having in mind that you established their background as childhood friends, both characters can go anywhere without even thinking about having sex with each other. None of them have even realized that the other sees them in a sexual way, so neither of those scenes would make sense unless they were part of an imcomplete scene (a daydream of the main character maybe).

 

[Project Hess]

At this point it probably seems I'm being overly critical, but the naughty bits of your story come out of nowhere. Having in mind that you established their background as childhood friends, both characters can go anywhere without even thinking about having sex with each other. None of them have even realized that the other sees them in a sexual way, so neither of those scenes would make sense unless they were part of an imcomplete scene (a daydream of the main character maybe).

No worries, it's my first time making a game and constructive criticism is great for a first time developer. I'll make sure to note this and fix it in future updates.

 

[Hercule_Poirot]

One way to avoid writing in third person is if you only use names when one of them talks directly to the other person.

 

[Patan]

i thought it was the porn parody of the tv show. disappointed! :FeelsBadMan:

 

[M$hot]

i thought it was the porn paradoy of the tv show. disappointed! :FeelsBadMan:

Let's be honest, if it doesn't include Allison Brie, any parody would be disappointing!

 

[rld142]

Let's be honest, if it doesn't include Allison Brie, any parody would be disappointing!

thanks now I don't know if I need to watch community or if I need to jerk off

 

[ltpika]

You can do both at the same time

 

[beepiss]

Is this a heterosexual game? Hard gay? Somewhere in between?

 

[Project Hess]

Is this a heterosexual game? Hard gay? Somewhere in between?

It is a heterosexual game.

Also, there won't be an update this week, will probably aim for October 15th for the next big update, and will probably make a Halloween update as well.

 

[Eoin]

Hessai, has there been any work/updates since uploading this? Is it dead?

 

[Project Hess]

Currently I haven't been working on a update due to college life, but now that I have gotten out of it I will probably try to get a release out before the year ends.

I also procrastinated a lot if I wanted to continue the project or not, but I don't want to let people down.

 

[DrAlta]

links are dead