HTML Completed Corrupted City [v1.2] [Aviary]

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You are Alex. You’ve left behind the familiar embrace of friends, family, and a stable job to chase a new beginning in a strange city with your boyfriend who had landed a promising gig. They told you it was a reckless move, but you didn't listen. The glittering city, with its promise of fame and fortune, beckoned.

Will you surrender to the city's cynical grip, just like so many before you? Or will you hold onto your dignity and innocence?
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Thread Updated: 2025-01-29
Release Date: 2024-11-29
Developer: Aviary

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Version: 1.2
OS: Windows, Mac, Linux
Language: English
Other Game: My Demon Friend
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[Trasher2018]

Thats a lot of nothing ... there is no content. You get a job and then nothing happens and there is nothing to do.

And when you watch TV you lose Energy and Mood ... instead of gaining Mood.

Energy: 50
Cash: $290
Mood: 80
Lust: -238

Job: Property Agent

Day: Monday
Days until Rent is due: -21

And nothing happens ...... yeah...

 

[Deleted member 451676]

Exactly about 5 minutes of content.

 

[NavnFugl]

Promising start, like the concept. Can't wait for more content.

 

[Aviary]

Thats a lot of nothing ... there is no content. You get a job and then nothing happens and there is nothing to do.

And when you watch TV you lose Energy and Mood ... instead of gaining Mood.

Energy: 50
Cash: $290
Mood: 80
Lust: -238

Job: Property Agent

Day: Monday
Days until Rent is due: -21

And nothing happens ...... yeah...

In the dialogue it should explain that you lose mood because it's a bad TV this is why you can purchase a better tv from the electronics store.

Exactly about 5 minutes of content.

Have you seen the two endings? It doesn't look like a lot of content but you have various paths to take in the game that unlock more content.

Thanks for the feedback!

 

[Mr Sandman]

What engine is this?

 

[Rudrig]

You should add the tag "Real porn"

 

[TheNeuronProject]

What engine is this?

SugarCube

 

[GamesMtP]

I quite enjoy real porn if the pictures/videos are well chosen and makes sense. I will test this next version with the male protag.

 

[Deleted member 584847]

hey man

sorry to bother...
just wanted to ask, how far will you take this game, in the matter of fetishes? will you stick to usual bdsm/prostitution/corruption type or do you plan to make something more spicy such as (for example) bestiality/gore/urination/loli/shota/monster/whateverpplfindsfapable style?

 

[Nelythia]

Start with a forced relationship, already a red flag for me.
Nothing original like player choices at all.

 

[The 1★ Dude]

Again THAT russian guy.

 

[vagabond_ru]

Again THAT russian guy.

Who?

 

[Mr Sandman]

SugarCube

Thank you so much!

 

[Familienficke]

Monton, no content, no surprise.
According to Reggae, you should buy a phone.
To earn the 700 dollars + rent,
you have to sleep, shower, brush your teeth and work for 17 days.
Nothing else happens.
Worse: In the middle of it the job is gone, only so that you have to strip before the boss.
Sorry, boring.

 

[YeeterTheMeatBeater]

seen a few comments saying that there's not really much content so i'll keep an eye on the game and wait for more stuff to be released

 

[Aviary]

hey man

sorry to bother...
just wanted to ask, how far will you take this game, in the matter of fetishes? will you stick to usual bdsm/prostitution/corruption type or do you plan to make something more spicy such as (for example) bestiality/gore/urination/loli/shota/monster/whateverpplfindsfapable style?

I'll take feedback and if people want to see some of those fetishes I may add them.

 

[Rodrigo Caiman]

I recommend that you try to optimize the size of the files, 300MB already in a first release is over.

 

[Marlin Brandy]

a couple critiques:
- I'd like to give a +1 to what Rodrigo Caiman said, there are next to no important pictures, yet the file size is already 300MB, I suggest some compression on some of them cause it's going to bloat hard and fast
- The price of items and how much you earn really makes playing the game a grind
- The fight breaking out in the gym is also too common of an event, and makes improving fitness impossible
- Lust gains are next to none, and if you go to sleep with around 5 lust, the lust counter actually starts going into the negatives, which will ruin any erotic content in the future, and make it impossible as well to get them
- There's a way to bypass paying rent; on the second/third rent day, if you wake up to the sound of Jason's shower, you will skip paying rent entirely and the counter will go into the negatives
- There's no feeling of progression
- You can nap infinitely without any consequences, giving you infinite energy basically.

For a proof of concept, it's not too bad. There are a couple typos here and there, but nothing egregious. There is way too little content though, this feels more like a version 0.0.1 rather than 0.1.0, which seems to promise at least one part of the story complete. You should also be able to work more than once a day imho. I'd suggest including some random events with maybe a 'city roaming' option so as to give some erotic content to fill in the game for now.

Keep updating, it's got potential

 

[Boobman4424]

i like it if you keep updating at a good clip