Out of 5:-
Renders: 3. It is nothing noteworthy but good enough. So, I gave it mid rating.
Story: 5. The story is fresh enough in the VN category and the Ren'py engine. The story has depth to it and seems to make sense. Good enough to be real and not look blatantly look unbelievable. The scene of 0.3 actually makes sense and looked perfectly written. Loved the scene if you know what I am talking about.
Corruption: 5. The corruption so far reminds me of A perfect marriage but the stage is setup in such a platform that it is easy for the writer to increase the range of corruption based on FMC's mission. The corruption for me makes sense and the range of corruption looks believable.
Dialogue: 4. The dialogue is not boring and if you read patiently can see how the reluctance is so far. The inner thoughts of the characters are fun to read. However, the huge texts with solid background can easily be improved with a cg of the thinker and in dialogue boxes which makes it much more easy to read.
Scenes: 4. Not animated so 4 but the scene for the "actions" are perfectly executed and the characters did exactly what you think they would do.
In short, fanfuckingtastic game. Love the premise, corruption and scenes. Along with all that if I am not wrong the time between each updates doesn't seem to be more than 1-2 months. Go on dev and best of luck. Finally, always remember to take the suggestions and constructive criticisms of the fans coz if you do we will also have your back.
Renders: 3. It is nothing noteworthy but good enough. So, I gave it mid rating.
Story: 5. The story is fresh enough in the VN category and the Ren'py engine. The story has depth to it and seems to make sense. Good enough to be real and not look blatantly look unbelievable. The scene of 0.3 actually makes sense and looked perfectly written. Loved the scene if you know what I am talking about.
Corruption: 5. The corruption so far reminds me of A perfect marriage but the stage is setup in such a platform that it is easy for the writer to increase the range of corruption based on FMC's mission. The corruption for me makes sense and the range of corruption looks believable.
Dialogue: 4. The dialogue is not boring and if you read patiently can see how the reluctance is so far. The inner thoughts of the characters are fun to read. However, the huge texts with solid background can easily be improved with a cg of the thinker and in dialogue boxes which makes it much more easy to read.
Scenes: 4. Not animated so 4 but the scene for the "actions" are perfectly executed and the characters did exactly what you think they would do.
In short, fanfuckingtastic game. Love the premise, corruption and scenes. Along with all that if I am not wrong the time between each updates doesn't seem to be more than 1-2 months. Go on dev and best of luck. Finally, always remember to take the suggestions and constructive criticisms of the fans coz if you do we will also have your back.