Overall one of the best games on this site with the most frequent update schedule I've seen. One of the few dev's worth supporting.
Story: 4.5/5 - Story is pretty good compared to most games on this site. It's a pretty straight forward mystery-type story, but keeps you entertained enough to keep playing.
Characters: 5/5 - Characters in this game are what really make this game stand out. Theres not only a lot of variety of these characters with different personality types, appearences, etc but they are all well written as to their background and story. Alot of games on this site have alot of characters to appease different fetishes, but none of them are actually written to be interesting.
Renders 4.5/5 - The renders are absolutely amazing (I love koikatsu models so I may be biased), and it's clear the developer spent alot of time creating unique scenes/models. However, alot of the images seem to be a bit blurry on my computer. I'm running a 1080p 60Hz screen so I don't really have anything special, but the images look like they might be in a lower resolution. Its prob too late to change it now, but I think that's one big improvement the game can make, especially with how high quality the actual renders are.
Gameplay 4.5/5 - This game is a free-roam sandbox type game with quite a bit of freedom (which is great for games with many girls). The game doesn't really have any grinding, which is great for any game. The game is centered around the mind control mechanic, but you still have to build relationships with every girl so the whole mind control aspect is actually very tame. I really like how you can choose which route you can go with each girl (slave or love). The only thing I dislike is how there's a morning->afternoon->evening cycle but there's really nothing to do in the evening so you pretty much get 2 actions before you need to sleep. It makes an otherwise non-grindy game feel grindy, I think there should be like a "quick sleep" button or something to make that process faster or add some more stuff at night.
Content 5/5 - I'm pretty sure this is the only dev on this entire platform releasing weekly updates. It's clear that this guy is truly passionate about what he does and isn't just raking in patreon money with nothing to show for it like alot of other dev's on this platform. Game currently has quite a bit of content already, but with the speed of updates it's expanding fast.