[Rev @ v0.5.0]
Art's nice, most girls are cute. Don't care for the loli or the tree but viewer results will vary.
Story's fine. Voice is good, narrative is fine, dialog is mostly good. I'll get to tone in a moment.
Porn's vanilla, and that's a shame with the tags posted. Corruption, Pregnancy and some of the others are right up my alley but are either rough in this release or barely present at all. There's a very high likelihood I'm just bitter cuz I didn't get to knock up the cowgirl.
Something in the overall tone is offputting, but I can't quite put my finger on it. Maybe it's the Sword of Damocles thing, maybe it's my personal preference of corrupting girls from a stance of power rather than as a desperate measure to save the character's own ass. I feel the MC spends an awful lot of the time passive with the plot happening to him, rather than out sewing the seeds of discord as a good pervert should.
TLDR: Not quite there yet for me, but quality as it stands.
Art's nice, most girls are cute. Don't care for the loli or the tree but viewer results will vary.
Story's fine. Voice is good, narrative is fine, dialog is mostly good. I'll get to tone in a moment.
Porn's vanilla, and that's a shame with the tags posted. Corruption, Pregnancy and some of the others are right up my alley but are either rough in this release or barely present at all. There's a very high likelihood I'm just bitter cuz I didn't get to knock up the cowgirl.
Something in the overall tone is offputting, but I can't quite put my finger on it. Maybe it's the Sword of Damocles thing, maybe it's my personal preference of corrupting girls from a stance of power rather than as a desperate measure to save the character's own ass. I feel the MC spends an awful lot of the time passive with the plot happening to him, rather than out sewing the seeds of discord as a good pervert should.
TLDR: Not quite there yet for me, but quality as it stands.