Well, the dev was clear about the progression; it's fast, even supersonic for me. He also said it was not meant to be something realistic and I totally agree. But a lot of things doesn't make any sense or are over-exaggerated. ...like a bill of more than 12k for clothes.......come on !!
Renders and sex scenes are ok but nothing really exciting and far from reaching what can be found these days. Some images have lighting issues, they are really dark.
The dialogues are unnatural most of the time with some bad attempts of being "psychological guidance". Despite the protagonists situations and past issues, I couldn't feel any emotion conveyed through the lines.
It's not engrish at least.
All in all, I liked the premises but with a lot of polishing and a reworking of the dialogues it would reach a larger audience. But it doesn't seem to be the dev's goal. So, it's just gonna be a "Meet and Fuck" story. Not my cup of tea but I wish the dev good luck.
Renders and sex scenes are ok but nothing really exciting and far from reaching what can be found these days. Some images have lighting issues, they are really dark.
The dialogues are unnatural most of the time with some bad attempts of being "psychological guidance". Despite the protagonists situations and past issues, I couldn't feel any emotion conveyed through the lines.
It's not engrish at least.
All in all, I liked the premises but with a lot of polishing and a reworking of the dialogues it would reach a larger audience. But it doesn't seem to be the dev's goal. So, it's just gonna be a "Meet and Fuck" story. Not my cup of tea but I wish the dev good luck.