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mboshesap5

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Part of the problem is I'm still learning art. So every drawing I make, I feel like it isn't good enough so that's kind of depressing at times. And then you have the fact that I'm also learning twine and I'm also having to put together an enjoyable story. There's a lot that goes into this stuff. I find myself biting off more than I can chew sometimes and having to backpedal.

Anyway... I appreciate the understanding. I'm definitely not giving up. I like being creative. It's fun brainstorming with people on discord about story ideas. Writing jokes and dialog for the game has been my favorite part I think.

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tbf I really liked the art even in the first version. You don't have to be overly perfectionist in my opinion. It's not like this has to be your final game or whatever too.
 

9-corto

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Sep 15, 2018
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I completely agree with the last post, once you reach the minimun reasonable quality (and this game surely has it) story is way more important than art. I just hope this game development keeps being reasonably realistic and that the nun doesn't become a porn star, or is perverted too easily, or has something (suposedly) unreal for a nun like nipple piercings or a perfectly depilated pussy.
 

TitmusPrime

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I'd like to add since I was just reminded of it again, check out True Bond by Cloudlet. It's some of the best slow burn out there, aside from the dev dying. Writing is way more important once you reach an acceptable level of artwork. If great artwork was what mattered most we wouldn't play a game we'd just look up artist cgs instead. And I'm saying this as an artist.
 

Bummenphist

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Jul 21, 2018
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This really feels like it should be a slow burn story. Slowly fighting temptation, only giving in to it bit by bit, no in your face gratuitous nunsturbation until the point where she finally gives in. She should fight to keep her modesty until it's too late. And I feel that the guy should only appear in the chat, maybe until the ending when/if she gives in to him. He's not the main character, she is, he's really only the audience proxy at the moment. We shouldn't know what he's planning until she finds out. I have high hopes for this one, and the simplicity of the art style is a plus.
 
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Dinadass

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Aug 14, 2017
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Part of the problem is I'm still learning art. So every drawing I make, I feel like it isn't good enough so that's kind of depressing at times.
OP as art goes, you will never be happy. Internalize that. Finish a picture, note issues, and fix that on the next one.

Reworking the same piece of art will destroy that. Use it as inspiration for the next one. Finished art tends to be better than art you are always perfecting and never finish.

Hating your own art is more of a point of tradition.
 

chocolatemoli

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Aug 21, 2019
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Really great and interesting game, but too short:cry:
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I created a similiar character in AI chatbot, and thats fun:ROFLMAO:
 
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Vreejack

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The most important thing in the art, in this case, is to deliver good facial expressions. Those expressions tell half the story.
 
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Ferghus

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Uh, my computer is picking up a virus in your download file
How sure are you that it's a virus? Let us know how you've come to the conclusion it is most definitely a virus and not a false positive like 99% of all the other comments in the threads claiming a game has a virus. If you don't know what a false positive is, there's always Google.
 
4.50 star(s) 20 Votes