Deducting a point mainly for the lack of meaningful choices (it really is a kinetic novel rather than a game) and to be fair to games with better visuals, but I have very little to criticize. Of course the models all end up looking similar after you’ve played a few games using the same "engine", but I don’t really hold it against them. It leans heavily towards huge breasts, but isn’t as egregious as many in the genre on that front and introduces more reasonable body types as it goes. The variety of outfits is also nice.
The writing is mature and the storyline is sensible considering the premise of a harem VN. As is typical, the MC is inexplicably a chick magnet, but they all develop actual relationships organically and each adds depth to the underlying plot and variety to the slice of life elements. They have different goals and personalities, different reasons for becoming attached to the MC, and continue to play their own parts after joining his "collection". Each warms up to the harem and BDSM aspects at her own pace, and the MC is very respectful and caring towards them, and treats his situation more like a fun kink than some kind of superiority complex towards women. There were several instances where the characters’ issues and their support or attitude toward each other really tugged at my heartstrings.
Even though the premise of a guy opening a cafe and fooling around with his staff seemed superficial on its face, I quickly became invested in the fate of each character, and I am genuinely intrigued by the, well, intrigue creeping up around them and pulling the MC into something much more substantial. It remains to be seen whether the writers can stick the landing and keep things interesting without expanding the harem to the point of absurdity. Hopefully the linearity will help them keep a firm grip on how the story develops and fully utilize each character.
As of 0.9, typos and other errors were also extremely few and mostly concentrated in the more recent releases, which helped keep the experience seamless.
The writing is mature and the storyline is sensible considering the premise of a harem VN. As is typical, the MC is inexplicably a chick magnet, but they all develop actual relationships organically and each adds depth to the underlying plot and variety to the slice of life elements. They have different goals and personalities, different reasons for becoming attached to the MC, and continue to play their own parts after joining his "collection". Each warms up to the harem and BDSM aspects at her own pace, and the MC is very respectful and caring towards them, and treats his situation more like a fun kink than some kind of superiority complex towards women. There were several instances where the characters’ issues and their support or attitude toward each other really tugged at my heartstrings.
Even though the premise of a guy opening a cafe and fooling around with his staff seemed superficial on its face, I quickly became invested in the fate of each character, and I am genuinely intrigued by the, well, intrigue creeping up around them and pulling the MC into something much more substantial. It remains to be seen whether the writers can stick the landing and keep things interesting without expanding the harem to the point of absurdity. Hopefully the linearity will help them keep a firm grip on how the story develops and fully utilize each character.
As of 0.9, typos and other errors were also extremely few and mostly concentrated in the more recent releases, which helped keep the experience seamless.