Dude, your english is so bad it gave you three stars from me instead of one. the models are very cute and storywise there would be plenty of potential. I really hope you wont let this game down. Dont give up.
Characters look good, but the writing is literally worse than MTLshit, including: non-sensical sentences, not capitalizing letters, countless gramatical errors and the list goes on. Add to that the fact that the game advances at a breakneck pace, for me it's a no-no for now.
Try getting someone that can actually write in english and pacing out the development of the characters a bit, the game could be golden.