VN Ren'Py Cradle Beyond the Veil [v0.1.6] [First Wish Studio]

[BTungsteno]

It was a nice demo, yeah the broken-english to perfect english of the forest girl felt weird, like in the last few moments before the demo ended, she unlocked the full english perk, but none the less in terms of graphics,lights, is looking promising, good luck devs

 

[Forgotted]

So far seems to be the perfect amount of black in the images/animations. Many times it's too dark and I can't see what's going on.


Amazing artwork/images/renders. Certainly the best I've seen around here given the really small file size.
Impressive.


I really enjoyed her speech and while it drove me a bit nuts I would still love to see it go on and just slowly taper off over the first 2 or 3 updates to a nice happy in between language that's easy to quickly read.

I'm guessing that since this was a 'demo'...when the first actual release comes out the mc won't be getting laid within an hour of meeting characters?

Also gotta love the Dev's upbeat attitude in here. This is going to be a great project!
Best of Luck!!
Thanks So Much

 

[TheRipper_YBT16]

English is not my first language, so I thought you were making a statement. Sorry if I offended you.

Not at all, sorry if I came off as contentious or offended you. Also from what I can see, your English is good so don't worry about it too much.

 

[Matoyoshi]

I have to say, this is short right now, but it is VERY well made. If it can keep this quality going forward while going into the story more it will be an excellent game.

 

[Megenos]

Very nice demo guys. Nice ambience, lovely lighting, top animations. I do agree though that the broken English/Elven speak to her having perfect English in her head feels pretty odd. I understand the intent cause you want people to understand what she's thinking about, but it'd probably be best to stay consistent & just try to initially ease people in to understanding what the words she's using mean first. Hope that helps. Will keep an eye out for this for sure.

 

[Hyren Vex]

i think the talking/speaking and thinking language was odd too, but i still like the way the elf speak, make things a bit slow to understand but adds a little charm to Roleplay. please guys, consider give option to toggle this kind of "feature" on and off. if this start to become a headache.

 

[Matoyoshi]

One more thing, I have to disagree with the people talking about her thoughts being in English. As long as it is clear that they are her thoughts and not what she is saying, it is perfectly fine. The entire point is so the audience understands what she is thinking. It wouldn't make sense to have her thoughts being in the Elvish language also as there would be no point showing them as thoughts then.

 

[newman3301]

good luck guys!

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Great.. Thx

 

[Zilcho]

Brutalisk's animations are really top-notch. If Honey Select 2 is used in part of the process, it's definitely some of the best I've seen. I could be wrong, though, but either way, it's hot shit. Looking forward to more.

 

[shady1me]

Why didn't the girl have sex with the monster? disappointing

 

[Forgotted]

Why didn't the girl have sex with the monster? disappointing

Because they didn't write it that way. pleasing


Cheers

 

[shady1me]

A girl should ride on that monster to bring it to its knees

 

[Beast Within]

A girl should ride on that monster to bring it to its knees

 

[krowndsnakd]

What the fuck was that???

This level of animation is unprecedented for a Ren'Py game... Had it had an animated creampie scene, it would have been glorious, but can't complain... It is magnificent.

How many months did this take?

 

[Obsidion69]

No denying that's some high quality animation. Also while it might not be the most descriptive overview you gotta admit that ".....get isekai'd....fuck hos.....do hero shit....." is pretty direct and on point.

 

[pipi1818]

what a pontential good game

 

[Nimbus Commando]

Honestly gave it a sub awesome work, can't wait to see more.