[Based on the prologue version.]
The images are of poor quality, nearly always very grainy and sometimes with confused content. The text has problems with grammar, punctuation, and capitalization. (Strongly recommend getting a proofreader.) The prologue hints at a backstory to be revealed, but will jump around in a disjointed fashion at times. The dialogue doesn't sound (at least to me) at all like how people would speak. Finally, yet again we have a protagonist with a massive dick; he shoots and fights magically well.
I rated it at 3 stars as there's still hope for great improvement here. If it wasn't the first version here, I'd have given it 2 instead.
The images are of poor quality, nearly always very grainy and sometimes with confused content. The text has problems with grammar, punctuation, and capitalization. (Strongly recommend getting a proofreader.) The prologue hints at a backstory to be revealed, but will jump around in a disjointed fashion at times. The dialogue doesn't sound (at least to me) at all like how people would speak. Finally, yet again we have a protagonist with a massive dick; he shoots and fights magically well.
I rated it at 3 stars as there's still hope for great improvement here. If it wasn't the first version here, I'd have given it 2 instead.