Ren'Py - Crepuscule [S1E9 v0.09] [Axel Shive]

This one is one of a kind.
The Engrish is horrible.
You're forced into everything, including witnessing other LIs fuck each other.
Needless free roam that is clunky.
The renders are outdated and ugly.
Everything feels rushed and the story hops all over the place.
Needs a deep rework and probably a more talented writer.

I have read the all the nine available chapters, and I got bored on the first three chapters already. Clicking the space key to read this story is like playing Elder Scrolls I, II, or III frames by frames, or even worse. I know the author is ambitious about the story, of which, however, the characters' dialogs are short and tedious for reading. Not even mention the countless clicking the space button (or mouse). It definitely needs more interesting world settings and story plots, rather than a few non-necessary lesbians performances.