Ren'Py - Cross Worlds [v0.24] [Lustful Entertainment]

I played Cross Worlds once, before the relationship rework.
It was a rather classic straightforward Ren'Py game with bits of sandbox. The story unfolded itself and was enjoyable. I would've put between 4 and 5*.

Now, it's among the most boring grindfest where you spend your time hitting Ctrl and skip time until you've raised happiness/control, then you play some random scenes to be done with it.

If I had completed what was available on my 1st playthrough in 155 days without skipping time too much, I now am at day 340 and barely started with Sybil after around 6 laborious IRL hours.
And I say that after I just 100%'d "Man of the House"!

Not to mention inconsistensies. From relation 2 to 3 with Sybil, she goes from a caring "landlady" to, when you pick "Tease":
- Hey landlady, you have time? We could go to your bed...
- Ho! Yes we could, but I don't have time, sorry D:
[Insert Jackie Chan confused meme]
The MC and her never ever talked about anything sexual whatsoever at that point.
I've spotted the same shenanigans with Laia.

Inorganic and confusing as hell.
And again, the damned happiness/control, what a chore.
I still give a 2nd * for the art.

This game is genuinely one of the worst examples of mind control/corruption I've ever seen it has so many flaws and does virtually nothing right.

Step 1: Corrupting the characters themselves changes almost/literally nothing about their character they will be mind controlled to have numerous sex scenes unlocked and still behave the same as before. If you want to add character corruption and have it feel like a real thing change how they act, change how they look to indicate that they ae changing and make it feel like more than just a stat increase.


Step 2: Make sex scenes feel even remotely earned and actually alter behaviour afterwards, the sex scenes tied to corruption are all essentially gain X amount of a stat -> watch a short scene -> lose the stats and go back to beforehand with literally no behavioural change. They earn no progress they don't feel like a goal because nothing changes afterwards, they also do not feel earned because the characters behaviour beforehand is not altered at all it's as if they are a robot and you hit the sex button. It's like going up to a total stranger having sex instantly and then going back to being total strangers (then repeat), which sure sounds fine in concept but having this kind of loop for the main characters is extremely shallow and the scenes are not remotely good enough to justify existing for themselves.


Step 3: It's not gradual at ALL you go from kiss level to full on sex within a single corruption level this makes it feel even less earned and that there's nothing to go towards. The game has a city wide corruption story going where people go from normal to actively having sex on the street within days (ingame) of this plotline starting so where will this plotline go from here?? They take what could be a game wide overarching story plot and then immediately send it to it's logical conclusion within minutes of it starting with almost no action from the player.( also why would I have to corrupt individuals at all if people are just suddenly banging strangers on the street.) It seems like even the dev realised that it made no sense and they tuned it down but now what's the goal to get back to something that already happened?

4: This issue isn't directly related to the flaws of the games corruption system but it's made 10x worse by the issues of it, gaining stats on the characters is extremely tedious and boring and takes forever. They updated one character to improve the corruption system to make it somewhat gradual but that just makes the boring stat grinding take at least 5x longer and its not even slightly improved

I don't know how to even fix the issues within this game as a corruption/mindcontrol game, literally everything has been done wrong leading to it being super ungratifying and simply boring. There is little actual content as is so scrapping it would feel bad, but the older corruption system is genuinely 1/10 garbage, the newer one is a step in the right direction but still feels kinda bad as it's held back by how bad the old one was and that it still somewhat relies on it.


Why not a 1/5 and why did I even play through the whole game if I thought it was this bad? Because the art is good and the game during the more linear/RPGlike segments was decently good the game would probably be better if it focused more on that, but instead most gameplay time is spent on the corruption sandbox aspect (which is bad)

oh and proofread your game with the sister on there's so many mistakes its insane


tl;dr characters do not feel corrupted they act the exact same before and after, scenes feel unearned and are not great, and the "relationships" are not gradual at all somehow simultaneously feeling like they barely started and already met their near conclusion

There is a lot of good characters in this game, good art too, but what it gets me most is the theme, mind control and corruption, funny writing
I know the dev is reworking some stuff, hopefully it gets better with some grind, have potential

Waiting for more! It rarely happens for me. Chars are diverse, funny and easy to distinguish. Lots of diffrent stuff to enjoy if you are into some real shit...
I hope updates will come in regular way then i will update my review with further criticque

2 Stars....
Recommended? Probably not
(sorry so long)

The grammar and pronoun use is the worst. Your buddy is always referred to as they, them, and so on. If your friend is a female then it can call her a Him. Your sister is referred to as a lad. These mistakes really distracting and ruins the game.
"what about Robin? Are they ready?" (rather than is he ready?)
Just wait for them a few minutes, you know how they are." (about a singular friend)
"Robin doesn't talk much but that's fine they're loyal" (should be he's loyal or she's)
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Spelling/grammar
"Does that means?"
"I don't the kit"
etc....
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Map shortcuts take you to the main location you are headed except for when going to the Guild. It takes you outside and you then click to go in. Small thing I know but you have to do this over and over so gets old.

When you choose party members they will disappear sometimes.
Your journal never updates with details about characters.
The Moms look the same age as the kids.
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Great artwork and characters, though it's severely lacking sometimes.
i.e A quest to catch a creature has many different things happening, traps, magical 'bomb', etc...but the scene never changes. It's just you looking at your friend in a single pose pretty much while the action happens off screen.
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You spend LOTS of time building various stats for the mind control part of the game only to find it doesn't matter and you can't use that part yet. Once or twice on a few characters but only the most basic levels. You can't advance to the good stuff. The thing is, you don't know which characters you can change until you grind like crazy then try to change 'levels'...
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Beautiful game that could be among the best with corrections and more content. If the kinetic style quests are changed it would go a long way as well. Even if they just fixed all the pronoun errors it would help as it just sounds dumb the way things are. It was released almost a year and a half ago and maybe they will fix it. Maybe they will figure out a direction for the characters as they don’t seem to know if they are male/female/it or whatever. The game certainly would be 5 star then.
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Latest update short and boring.
Still can't tell the difference between singular, plural, feminine, and masculine.

Even though version says 0.9 it feels like 0.2 at best (partly because of lack of focus). Even though the art is great this game just doesn't have enough to pull you in.
I played to the end of 0.9 and it feels like i just scratched what this game is supposed to be (in like 1-2 years from now at best)
RPG gameplay is barely present. I'm not saying game should have some elaborate dungeon system or social rolls but at least some use for stats beyond few preplanned interactions in quests would be nice.
Quests themselves are (if i understand correctly) nothing more than short kinetic stories. There is no real gameplay attached to them.
Corruption is ok conceptually, but considering how much of it is locked behind "work in progress" it feels very shallow and repetitive.
TL;DR while art is good game itself is not yet deep/big enough to be played

Cross Worlds is a fantasy corruption game with VN and RPG aspects. You play as a guy who gets isekai'd, develops mind control powers and starts corrupting everyone around them.

The game's biggest weakness is definitely its lack of focus. The story advances through quests which have few choices and force you into either stat checks of the weak RPG system, or item checks which you'll immediately scroll back to fulfill. After a while, you'll be introduced to the corruption gameplay and everything else immediately takes a backseat.

Only... not enough of a backseat? The story portions of the game keep coming back even though it runs almost completely parallel to the corruption game, the two rarely acknowledging one another. It feels bizarre to be corrupting the town at one moment before being sent off to take out an unrelated cult in the next. It's very jarring.

On the bright side, the art is good. Technically it's a monster girl game, but the girls are only monstery in the loosest sense. So far there's a mushroom girl, a couple elves, an amazon, a goblin, a harpy (sorta), and an androgynous slime. There's futa and probably gay content if that's your thing, but it seems like the devs are pushing towards making it optional. Regardless, if you like what you see in the screenshots, there's more to be found in game.

I feel like the game has potential, but it needs to choose a lane. Cross Worlds could be a VN/RPG where you run quests, meet characters, and explore a fantasy world, or it could be a corruption game where you turn the girls of the town into debauched, slutty exhibitionists for fun. Running both simultaneously doesn't seem to be working and weakens both. Given that it's a sex game, I would definitely focus in on the corruption theme. The RPG and story aspects are extremely forgettable, but there's a good framework for a corruption game here.

Overall, Cross Worlds could be an excellent game if the devs figure out how to combine their story and their corruption. It has excellent art and some good scenes already, but it's heavily diluted by the random fantasy quests horning in on a perfectly good corruption game.

Pros of the game,
The art is distinctive and very good
Soundtrack is also surprisingly nice.
Navigation is functional, quick sleep is a nice time saver but does get repetitive when your generally just looping back to the adventures guild.

Cons,
My biggest con would be the writing while its not poorly done grammatically there is just something about it that rubs me the wrong way.
-The pre isekai segment honestly just made me actively dislike the main character, I'm not sure if its supposed to induce empathy or apathy
-Main character isn't just dense but actually unintelligent to the point its distracting, story suggests he tried hard at number of things and just never quite clicked but the way he is portrayed honestly just makes it seem like he is generally incompetent
-Narrator weirdly swaps between attempting to be humorous and actually being a narrator but feels like it just comes across as disruptive to the general flow of the game.

Neutral but worth consideration, the game feels like it is heavily missing tags, but as this isn't dev uploaded I guess a dev note with expected tags is out of the question, also the whole pre-isekai segment feels like its gonna be so long before its relevant that the character introductions will have been wasted and would have been better off starting without it.

Version 0.3

Good:
>Nice art
>rough sketches of what could potentially become a very fun game, interesting concepts
>quests are fun and promising for future releases

Neutral (personally leaning negative since I'm not a fan):
>MC looks very effeminate
>Futa/NB best friend (they/them)
>seems like gay content is planned
>hooks for "sharing" left and right, will probably have optional NTR in the future

Negative:
>MC suffers from idiot syndrome at times
>while not soul-crushing, the game has a bit of grinding (be at X at time Y day Z to gain relationship points)
>low amount of content currently. Maximum is BJ from "landlady" and handjobs from a few others.

Should you download this:
Strong maybe, consider the current version a demo. It's not bad, just very unfinished.
It's not a waste of time, but currently you also aren't missing out by waiting for a few updates.

As straight man who isn't into sharing, I think this should be in the upper middle of your watch list. Higher if you are into futa/gay/sharing.

v0.11
+Fantastic art
+I love mind control games
-Mediocre Engrish
-Lots of WIP signs
-Lack of focus. lots of under developed girls and gameplay features.
-Grindy
-Somewhat Buggy
-MC is a bit stupid
+Over time became more mainstream in fetishes.
++Amazon was strongly teasing at futa. But ultimate became just a woman
++Shapeshifting slimeboy is now your choice of boy, girl, or futa.
++Initially you had a brother. could gay seduce him and optionally feminize him into a twink. Now you make an OOC decision on whether you "always had a sister and never a brother".
++Personally I appreciate that they are adding those straight options

It is getting better but could use some more work.

Very promising start

Pros:
Story feels good, actually moderately interesting and made me not want to skip through everything
Pretty good writing (see above)
Characters are differentiated (so doesn't feel like same characters just reskinned)

Cons:
Not too much content (although keep in mind just on version 0.3)
The control grinding felt underwhelming
Just the beginning so could easily get worse and update schedule remains to be seen

I love how one of the reviews on this game is complaining about Gen-Z, TikTok, and anime. That's goddamn hilarious. Go back to facebook and grumble about how kids these days are too soft or something...

Anyways, on to the review.

This game is great for an early release. The art looks good, the sex scenes are hot, and the quest system is pretty cool.

My only real complaint is lack of content, which will hopefully be fixed with more releases. I'm glad they made the unavailable scenes grayed out because that really frustrated me.

I do hope they add more choices/deviation per path though, because it seems like sometimes all the choices lead to the same outcome.

Specifically in a glory hole scene, theres a challenge to get rid of some thug whos being over aggressive. No matter which way you choose to get rid of him, nothing changes. Why even have 3 options if theyre all the same? Theres no replay value there.

In any case, I hope thats changed but beyond that its great so far.

Can't wait to see how this is developed further. Good luck and God speed dev!

A lot of promise here. The art is high quality and the writing, which needs a little grammar proofing, is decent. I think it'll take a little more to truly see how the quest and mind-altering systems are going to work completely but the foundation is seeming solid.

Heard about this game because of it's Breast Expansion that I heard about in a discord server. It delivers and seems to promise more in the future. Also the gameplay and characters are interesting so it's not a complete slog to play through the game just to get to some specific content. Game isn't finished, but it is a good start and I look forward to seeing where it goes. Got a patron from me.

I really like this game so far and it shows a great deal of promise.
The art style is great with the only thing being the breast expansion animations sticking out a bit, but I don't mind.
Story so far is solid and quite interesting, but I'll have to wait and see where it's going to make any real judgment.
The characters are also really good, both in terms of character and design.
For me it really hits it home with the fetishes it seems to cater too . The games main ones being monster girls and hypnosis.
The fame/infamy mechanic seems interesting but if handled incorrectly can quite easily become boring or makes it so you require a guide to play this game and get all the content.

I'm really exited to see where this one is going and how it will turn out.

Very mixed reaction that's largely accounting to tastes.
A lot of effort put into design and art. But everything about this game is just so little-girly, vapid and effeminate. The MC's aspirations in the story are clearly the thinly veiled aspirations of the dev. The vapidity comes largely from the characters' simplistic aspirations and interactions. There's just no gravity or substance in the characters or their reactions to anything around them, including being transported into another world.

And does everyone want to be a fucking tiktok star? I'm assuming this is a social media obsessed gen-z thing and I hope it's not indicative of the majority or I truly fear for the generation. But this looks to be created by and geared towards young males who have watched WAY too much anime that was supposed to be geared towards young girls. Though I'm noticing that trend with more and more recent content.

Character design is frilly and girly in general with even the most "masculine" characters drawn with little girl facial features.
Entirely a taste thing, but the writing and the art are just too saccharine sweet, cringe, obliviously self-obsessed and bafflingly cutesy for me.

Rating based on 0.1 release :
Very good and interesting first release !

Nice art,
Interesting early storyline (corruption/harem sotrylines are always interesting )
Interesting Karma/Fame mechanics.


Let us hope that these will be used to their full potential in later releases!

I loved the artwork. It's very good 2D art. The story is pretty interesting so far, there is zero grinding, you get to level up and progress by not being an idiot, and there's nice background music too. Very good for an 0.1 and I hope this project goes on.

Very good. Art is great, infact the only complaint I would have about any of the art is the Breast Expansion chibi animation is.. very immersion breaking. It doesn't fit the whoel style of the rest of the game and could use redoing or removal imho.

Story is engaging enough. It's definitely one of the better ones slightly campy slighty humorous but still immersive. And well... were the game is apparently headed towards sounds like an aweful lot of fun. Honestly was disspointed only because I reached the current end of the build and wanted to play more.

Very promising start. Hoping to influence everyone and not necessarily transform them physically but mentally while retaining their original gender. Be interesting if you could maintain both stat scores versus a sliding scale of one over the other.