VN Ren'Py Crossed Lines [v0.1] [Vera Nova]

[VeraNova]

VeraNova I played a game. It looks good visually, but I got ntr vide. There is no netorare tag, and preaty vague description about value of your choices. Can you give some clearness here for folks like me, will there be ntr, and will it be avoidable? So people could move on or stay depending on their tastes.

NTR is planned in the future, it will be avoidable with a clear warning.

 

[Stakos]

I understand that the dev wants to make a cuck/NTR game but, since he/she's focusing on the story here, I just want to point out that it makes no sense at all. You have the sweetest girl hanging out with a bully and although she says there are more to him we see no redeeming qualities, just a bully. I found this story element really off putting and it pulled me out of the whole plot, especially when the guy started talking about the MC being a cuck and she said that he's being weird TODAY. Apart of the fact that this is the shittiest way to defend your friend it makes no sense that she's surprized that the known bully is bullying his known victim.

 

[Prokopije]

I understand that the dev wants to make a cuck/NTR game but, since he/she's focusing on the story here, I just want to point out that it makes no sense at all. You have the sweetest girl hanging out with a bully and although she says there are more to him we see no redeeming qualities, just a bully. I found this story element really off putting and it pulled me out of the whole plot, especially when the guy started talking about the MC being a cuck and she said that he's being weird TODAY. Apart of the fact that this is the shittiest way to defend your friend it makes no sense that she's surprized that the known bully is bullying his known victim.

Maybe tat's her "thing". We had one girl in high school, she was like wearing those shirts "Stop bullying", doings campaigns etc, just to be discovered later that she banged every single one bully in the school. Maybe this chick is something similar

 

[ffive]

I understand that the dev wants to make a cuck/NTR game but, since he/she's focusing on the story here, I just want to point out that it makes no sense at all. You have the sweetest girl hanging out with a bully and although she says there are more to him we see no redeeming qualities, just a bully. I found this story element really off putting and it pulled me out of the whole plot, especially when the guy started talking about the MC being a cuck and she said that he's being weird TODAY. Apart of the fact that this is the shittiest way to defend your friend it makes no sense that she's surprized that the known bully is bullying his known victim.

Part of being "the sweetest girl" is seeing good in everyone, including bullies.

Anyway, girl has clearly hots for him, and your MC has a girlfriend who isn't that girl. The whole passive/active baiting mostly came across to me as the "rival" being some kind of insecure retard who's trying to stake "his" territory because "his" girl talked nice about the MC. It didn't even feel like bullying, given he clearly thought he's making some great diss in his head there, but it was just so stupid, and the way he kept harping on it desperately trying to make it stick while everyone else was like "huh?", i almost felt sorry for him.

 

[foxyreader24]

So from the start, this game seems to be going the direction of NTR with the typical dark skinned antagonist trying to block / steal any girl from the MC. So far, not winning any points in my book.

Another issue I'm seeing is the damn mini games, such as the one where you are on the track. I have tried to hit the prompts but it doesn't seem to register, which is not my cup of tea.

 

[lolilol89]

Cool game