VN Ren'Py Crossed Lines [v0.15] [Vera Nova]

[VeraNova]

VeraNova I played a game. It looks good visually, but I got ntr vide. There is no netorare tag, and preaty vague description about value of your choices. Can you give some clearness here for folks like me, will there be ntr, and will it be avoidable? So people could move on or stay depending on their tastes.

NTR is planned in the future, it will be avoidable with a clear warning.

 

[Stakos]

I understand that the dev wants to make a cuck/NTR game but, since he/she's focusing on the story here, I just want to point out that it makes no sense at all. You have the sweetest girl hanging out with a bully and although she says there are more to him we see no redeeming qualities, just a bully. I found this story element really off putting and it pulled me out of the whole plot, especially when the guy started talking about the MC being a cuck and she said that he's being weird TODAY. Apart of the fact that this is the shittiest way to defend your friend it makes no sense that she's surprized that the known bully is bullying his known victim.

 

[Prokopije]

I understand that the dev wants to make a cuck/NTR game but, since he/she's focusing on the story here, I just want to point out that it makes no sense at all. You have the sweetest girl hanging out with a bully and although she says there are more to him we see no redeeming qualities, just a bully. I found this story element really off putting and it pulled me out of the whole plot, especially when the guy started talking about the MC being a cuck and she said that he's being weird TODAY. Apart of the fact that this is the shittiest way to defend your friend it makes no sense that she's surprized that the known bully is bullying his known victim.

Maybe tat's her "thing". We had one girl in high school, she was like wearing those shirts "Stop bullying", doings campaigns etc, just to be discovered later that she banged every single one bully in the school. Maybe this chick is something similar

 

[ffive]

I understand that the dev wants to make a cuck/NTR game but, since he/she's focusing on the story here, I just want to point out that it makes no sense at all. You have the sweetest girl hanging out with a bully and although she says there are more to him we see no redeeming qualities, just a bully. I found this story element really off putting and it pulled me out of the whole plot, especially when the guy started talking about the MC being a cuck and she said that he's being weird TODAY. Apart of the fact that this is the shittiest way to defend your friend it makes no sense that she's surprized that the known bully is bullying his known victim.

Part of being "the sweetest girl" is seeing good in everyone, including bullies.

Anyway, girl has clearly hots for him, and your MC has a girlfriend who isn't that girl. The whole passive/active baiting mostly came across to me as the "rival" being some kind of insecure retard who's trying to stake "his" territory because "his" girl talked nice about the MC. It didn't even feel like bullying, given he clearly thought he's making some great diss in his head there, but it was just so stupid, and the way he kept harping on it desperately trying to make it stick while everyone else was like "huh?", i almost felt sorry for him.

 

[foxyreader24]

So from the start, this game seems to be going the direction of NTR with the typical dark skinned antagonist trying to block / steal any girl from the MC. So far, not winning any points in my book.

Another issue I'm seeing is the damn mini games, such as the one where you are on the track. I have tried to hit the prompts but it doesn't seem to register, which is not my cup of tea.

 

[lolilol89]

Cool game

 

[shotzpro]

It looks good, I'll put it on watch and wait for more updates, little content so far BUT it has potential

Obs: put ntr tag for more players.

 

[FatYoda]

Hey, curious about the future NTR tag. What's the plans there? Is it unavoidable NTR? Will there be an NTS route? If Kaiti ends up with Tyson will NTI be possible? Ive been down this OF route on multiple games now and it almost always end us with MC getting cheated on. If it's just a straight NTR game I'll just step out and let you all enjoy your kink in peace. Light NTR isn't bad, but watching one of your best friends end up with a douchebag who bullies you...especially one who almost definitely roofied her at the party. No one forgets an entire party from the moment they showed up. I'll pass on that one. Thanks!

Edit: and just FYI, I'm not trying to influence the dev on the game...i just want to know if i should bail out early.
Edit2: I just remembered when i took Kaiti home it said NTR if i let Tyson take her and "Other routes" if i took her home. So yeah...at least some of the NTR seems avoidable.

 

[FatYoda]

It looks good, I'll put it on watch and wait for more updates, little content so far BUT it has potential

Obs: put ntr tag for more players.

There's no NTR in the game yet...well, unless you let Tyson take home the girl he drugged i guess. NTR is in the Planned tags section under Genre though, so yeah it's definitely coming in one form or another.

 

[XV71]

Another AI ntr game

 

[cormac69]

Another AI ntr game

Captain obvious reporting for duty. Tell us something we can't see for ourselves. lol.

 

[SpyderArachnid]

First time checking this out, and I actually liked it. Some tidbits I'll spoiler so it doesn't flood the thread.

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But yeah, otherwise, not too bad. Interested to see where this one goes. Best of luck with it and thanks.

 

[Æяiк]

can you not hide the NTR TAG? FILTERS ARE THERE FOR A REASON

 

[Jah-Ith-Ber]

I like it! Nice cast of characters I like the smaller focused groups. Avoidable NTR when the MC isn't a superhero and has to work to protect his girls is one of my favorite genres. it shouldnt just be a single decision though NTR/No NTR right at the start it should be a combination of decisions the MC makes

 

[fikka]

Why does the changelog jump from 0.1 to 0.15. It gives the false notion from the thread title that it has had multiple updates. I can understand the dev keeping an internal track of changes and milestones but for us it only gives a wrong sense of how far the game has matured. I would suggest incrementing the version based on each update only otherwise kindly share your versioning methodology.

 

[Evan Treborn]

oh Adidas, i'm in...

 

[VeraNova]

Why does the changelog jump from 0.1 to 0.15. It gives the false notion from the thread title that it has had multiple updates. I can understand the dev keeping an internal track of changes and milestones but for us it only gives a wrong sense of how far the game has matured. I would suggest incrementing the version based on each update only otherwise kindly share your versioning methodology.

My bad, I will change it for you next update!

 

[VeraNova]

Hey, curious about the future NTR tag. What's the plans there? Is it unavoidable NTR? Will there be an NTS route? If Kaiti ends up with Tyson will NTI be possible? Ive been down this OF route on multiple games now and it almost always end us with MC getting cheated on. If it's just a straight NTR game I'll just step out and let you all enjoy your kink in peace. Light NTR isn't bad, but watching one of your best friends end up with a douchebag who bullies you...especially one who almost definitely roofied her at the party. No one forgets an entire party from the moment they showed up. I'll pass on that one. Thanks!

Edit: and just FYI, I'm not trying to influence the dev on the game...i just want to know if i should bail out early.
Edit2: I just remembered when i took Kaiti home it said NTR if i let Tyson take her and "Other routes" if i took her home. So yeah...at least some of the NTR seems avoidable.

Hey thanks for the question!

NTR is fully avoidable. To avoid it you need to take Emily home yourself at the party, this will turn off any NTR/NTS stuff in the whole story. (Also the OF will not include any NTR/NTS).

If you choose the NTR/NTS option at the party, you can later decide (consciously with a warning) to take either the NTS or NTR route.

However, I am unfamiliar with NTI.

Hope this helps!

 

[JenMistress]

Well, had to start over, as the saves kept bring up error messages, which also meant I had to redo that mini game again. Idk, if only there was a way to bypass the mini game, would be a load of help. But anyways, so many paths it seems is going on now. Not a whole lot changed yet, other than slight little things between on if you take her home or if he does, and which girl you go out with that day, but all and all, so far the really enjoying this game. Thank you so very much for this!!!

 

[FatYoda]

Hey thanks for the question!

NTR is fully avoidable. To avoid it you need to take Emily home yourself at the party, this will turn off any NTR/NTS stuff in the whole story. (Also the OF will not include any NTR/NTS).

If you choose the NTR/NTS option at the party, you can later decide (consciously with a warning) to take either the NTS or NTR route.

However, I am unfamiliar with NTI.

Hope this helps!

Good news everyone! lol, but NTI is Netori, it's when the MC steals other dudes girls. It's basically the opposite of NTR. I'm a little sad too...I like NTS, but not with a douchebag like that. It's cool though, at least i have the option to not fuck with him at all. And i'm super glad about the OF storyline. Played one of those phone games a while ago, has multiple girls storylines, supposed to have both NTS and NTR stories. This one story where MC supported his girl starting an OF and it started out completely NTS and it was going great, then dev just slammed you in the face with the NTR hammer. It was a brutal one too, she went full humiliation route immediately...it was nuts. Anyway, thanks for the reply, I was hoping to not have to drop this game. Good shit sir.