0) Unpretty main character. Art should show more beautiful people than in life, not less.
1) Poor sound work. The sound of the phone in the game made me spill tea all over my dress.
You can't make that ugly, harsh, loud sound. It's also disgusting because it's almost
almost the only sound in the game.
2) Cowardly storytelling. Instead of a normal family, it's that foster parent cliché again,
to raise as much money for Patreon as possible. If I was interested in money,
I'd find something more profitable than making short stories.
3) Mediocre art. The art style is devoid of light and shadow and the correct laws
of color combination. Anatomical proportions don't always look natural. In the era of
DAZ and AI it looks like a sabotage against your own work. A deliberate degradation.
4) Vistagram? Probably the author thinks so highly of himself that he is sure that
NATO will send a DELTA SWAT team to bring him before an international tribunal for a crime
of nightmarish gravity: writing the word Instagram in a porn game. And for the production
pornography (!) won't even be prosecuted.
5) Compulsive lesbianism. The first exit from the house and already available option to choose - lesbian.
In real life, such a delicate relationship requires the most complicated etiquette. You can't just admit,
even to your best friend, that you're a lesbian. The author of this game must be a boy from a non-Western country.
and believes that if politicians promote LGBT, it's normal for ordinary people to be LGBT.
He would be quite surprised to find out how wrong it is.
6) Excessive mechanics. The author seems to think of women as some kind of robots that
have functions - depravity, lust, submissiveness - and these functions have a scale like an
an ancient barometer. This view of women is typical only of teenage boys.
7) The setting is realism, and that's great. Good thing it's not another stinking fantasy.
But that's about it. We don't see a woman's extraordinary fate, we see another typical college girl
with the same boring problems we've seen a thousand times before.
1) Poor sound work. The sound of the phone in the game made me spill tea all over my dress.
You can't make that ugly, harsh, loud sound. It's also disgusting because it's almost
almost the only sound in the game.
2) Cowardly storytelling. Instead of a normal family, it's that foster parent cliché again,
to raise as much money for Patreon as possible. If I was interested in money,
I'd find something more profitable than making short stories.
3) Mediocre art. The art style is devoid of light and shadow and the correct laws
of color combination. Anatomical proportions don't always look natural. In the era of
DAZ and AI it looks like a sabotage against your own work. A deliberate degradation.
4) Vistagram? Probably the author thinks so highly of himself that he is sure that
NATO will send a DELTA SWAT team to bring him before an international tribunal for a crime
of nightmarish gravity: writing the word Instagram in a porn game. And for the production
pornography (!) won't even be prosecuted.
5) Compulsive lesbianism. The first exit from the house and already available option to choose - lesbian.
In real life, such a delicate relationship requires the most complicated etiquette. You can't just admit,
even to your best friend, that you're a lesbian. The author of this game must be a boy from a non-Western country.
and believes that if politicians promote LGBT, it's normal for ordinary people to be LGBT.
He would be quite surprised to find out how wrong it is.
6) Excessive mechanics. The author seems to think of women as some kind of robots that
have functions - depravity, lust, submissiveness - and these functions have a scale like an
an ancient barometer. This view of women is typical only of teenage boys.
7) The setting is realism, and that's great. Good thing it's not another stinking fantasy.
But that's about it. We don't see a woman's extraordinary fate, we see another typical college girl
with the same boring problems we've seen a thousand times before.