DWYA8888
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- Jul 18, 2022
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Uhhh.... I hope, are you ready for cryticizm?Well, maybe it has the charm of amateurism? Or not? What specifically do you not like?
1. BackGround is Filter-Foto? Realy????
2. Hand-Draw art is always good,
but.... It just loking.... poor.... Very poor....
3. Story.... Well.... Mayby somoenes take it,
but for me, boring, not intereset, not originaly....
4. Gramatiks.... Ohhh.... Enf i hope is not you 1st lang....