RPGM - Completed - D.P [Final] [Agunosutosu]

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Devil Particle is Henteria Chronicles 2 but condensed down to 1/10th the playtime for those who don't want to read or can't put up with length exposition. Enjoyable if you like pixel animation h-games, though the NTR is questionable and it lacks the build up to get you invested.

It's only a couple hours long but you have to play through the game once to completion to get more than 'hearing lewd sounds through a doorway'. On the second playthrough you get to see the scenes, through an ability to see the past. What's weird is that despite knowing that an attack is coming and that your sister is getting blackmail fucked, the main character makes no effort to influence the events. Which is a let down for a game that straight up tells you you've time travelled. I would have liked the MC to have more awareness of their situation and attempt to exert more influence over the future after seeing the truth, rather than just... ignoring it and doing the same time-wasting fetch quests again. Basically, if you're going to use time travel, there's a more interesting way to do it.

A good, short pixel-porn game.

Started playing this game before it got translated but didn't finished due to the many fetch quests and unfulfilling 1st playthrough. Gave it a shot again but didn't expect much due to initial expectations.

In the same vein as NTRPG and its sequels and spinoff but doesn't capture the same magic. Instead of implementing scenes or voyeurism throughout the game, you can't view any scenes until a second playthrough, where you have the "touch" to see them which doesn't feel natural. You know what's happening behind the door but once you see the actual scene, you get let down by how basic it is and more importantly how annoying it is to shake the camera leading up to the climax.

Also, there's a lot of missed opportunities regarding scenes such as the hunter and Vesta, the lovey dovey couple, and the blacksmith and Dione.

Also the translation, which is MTLed then edited is alright enough but lack of spellcheck, consistency in dialogue and grammatical errors is apparent but at least he revised it though some word choice were questionable.

Overall, game is average and translation is ok. Would say good for one playthrough since they managed to shoehorn playing two playthroughs as a minimum for unlocking scenes.

For a supposed machine translation I found no difficulty in understanding it and would not have known it was MTL if it hadn't been specified. There were however still a few untranslated lines, but nothing game breaking, mostly just messages for not being able to enter areas on occasion.
Overall, for those who like NTR, this game is decent, but not a must.

Love it amazing story great for the NTR and Onee-chan''s lovers alike. Minor Grammar issues like 2 spots that I saw. Other than that an a few untranslated NPC's not bad for a first translation attempt.

Your standard pixel animation NTR game, you will however have to play through 3 times to get different endings.

The first thing which annoyed was the 4 to 5 pages of story setting at the beginning, then afterwards a further few minutes where you cannot control your character at all.

Saving cannot be done inside a building for some reason and must be done outside, the game consists of quests of which no hint is given unless you read the walkthrough that comes with the game.

The 1st walkthrough your will see NOTHING. That's right, play through and see nothing at all. Now I did that, you see only subtle aftereffects such as condoms etc...

2nd playthrough do all the quests again but this time you can use a special power to 'see' what happened, which is then added to the book in your room in case you want to replay the scenes.

The 'NTR' in this is not to my taste. for 2 reasons:

1) It centers on the whole blackmail thing, as opposed to stealing away a spouse by your own efforts and qualities.

2) In my opinion (without opening a debate) it's NOT NTR, it's your sister. I hear the argument that NTR is a loved one being stolen away. But i've never held that to be NTR. I've always held it to be ones mate, ones lover, or lovers. It's that biological sowing your seeds before a rival male does, or straight after, it's the sperm wars to pass on your genes vs another males. I don't get that with a sister or a mother. Just my thing. If my dad plows my mom I don't feel NTR'd because I have no interest, same if I had a sister and she brought a boyfriend round. So whilst playing I was just "okay my sister is banging someone". From a biological point of view that's success, she passes on the family genetics, with the sneaky potential of their father to be successful in turn.

Now there is one girl in the village who develops feelings for you but it's litreally drags you away, gives a handjob, says she loves you and then she is taken away and banged. HOW you are meant to feel any close connection there I do not know. That's generally what can make it successful, with some other games like Sana or Nymphomania Priestess you can develop a relationship with the character through the quests, through the combat. Love Love My Buddy for example, you build up love and affection through gifts and quest choices, you develop through quests and battles only to see them mated by someone else if you are not careful. With this you don't get that, you are thrown into a game, given a general gist of what to do in the form of a talking cat that gives hints and that's it.

How it could be improved, or a later game could be an improvement:

1) Make it the main characters lover - The biological mate,the wife, the girlfriend. A sister, at least for me, doesnt have that mating and passing on the family genes thing because....she is family and I'm not from Alabama.

2)Build up relationships - this can be done with black and white flashback images, indeed 1 is used in this game, more could have been done or done for a future game, flashbacks of first meeting, flashback of first kiss between the two, the first moment of passion, the wine and cheese picnics etc etc. Make us FEEL for the character.

3) Make it Competition - Biologically thats what it is with NTR, pass on your genes or the other guys will be. If someone thing gets to the point of hopelessness, to the point where she is forced and there is no way out, generally I'd walk away, other opportunities in life. Here I'd like choices, fight for affections, reverse the blackmail, have it you vs him or whoever else. Have it so you could walk away entirely, or that you could just take her away anyway, or that you could do what I'd do and take that long sword the merchant gives you, get rid of him and take his harem.

Just my opinion, take it or leave it.

You don't get to see the scenes until after the first playthrough which can be fun UNLESS like in this game. In this game it takes AGES to get through and really fucking benign tasks can easily make anyone go "why do I care?" The worst part is? The scenes suck. Yep. I normally LOVE ntr games where the guy is unaware at all. That's normally the one standard for me that can really dampen a game (Thug Hero Party and Ntrpg for example.) But that's how much I detest this game - by all standards I should love it. I love pixel animation. I love the themes and ideas behind the game. Just the absolute trash execution ruins it. Would never recommend this game and so it gets 1 star.