Others Daily Life with My Roommate Luna! [v0.2.0] [CottaDev]

[LexiTV]

Unique engine... it feels weird, but I guess it's unique. However, the writing is similar to an MTL. Barely readable.

If you click while a message plays, you'd expect the full message to show up. NO, it doesn't. It just skips the entire line, and the next one starts. You have to PAINFULLY wait for every line to finish. You can't skip or instantly display the text. This dev really is inexperienced and didn't bother to playtest his game.

The art and scenes themselves are decent! So this has some potential, I guess. Overall, it is a decent start.

 

[CottaDev]

Unique engine... it feels weird, but I guess it's unique. However, the writing is similar to an MTL. Barely readable.

If you click while a message plays, you'd expect the full message to show up. NO, it doesn't. It just skips the entire line, and the next one starts. You have to PAINFULLY wait for every line to finish. You can't skip or instantly display the text. This dev really is inexperienced and didn't bother to playtest his game.

The art and scenes themselves are decent! So this has some potential, I guess. Overall, it is a decent start.

Thanks for your feedback. I'll add the feature so that text in dialogue finishes, and typewriter speed setting. Yeah, I expected that my writing may be dogshit level since it's easy to tell that I'm not a native English speaker xD. In the future I would like to consider using some Patreon funds to hire someone to improve the readability of the dialogues. That's why I didn't hardcode dialogues in scenes and instead stored them in easily accessible .json files. Maybe do the same with translation if anyone would like to.

Edit: By the way, if someone is reading this reply and could be interested in being hired to do that (improving the dialogues or translation), add me on discord 'cottadev', so we can discuss it. I'll mention right away that I'd be interested in such services only from version 1.0.0 (i.e. in the future, where there will actually be quite a lot of these dialogues)

 

[Disciple of Rance]

mfw no muscular tomboy roommate to carry my groceries

 

[TheRetroAiden]

I like where this is goin and there is nothing you can do to stop this