Others - Damn That's Felicia? [v0.10A] [Trriggered Bakery]

Love this game, a shame when a work clearly with good ideas gets shitted on due to obvious biases like "AI art", "I don't like the format" or "this isn't writen EXACTLY how I wanted!" aren't intellectually honest complaints. Almost every negative review feels like soulless drones parroting each other in seem of validation of their own preferences regarding fetishes. This game IS what it tries to be, not what you want it to be, there's other games for that.

What does it try to be? A simulator of an already established relationship with a girl that's clearly not the most balanced mentally. You talk as if you already know each other (since in canon, you do), she is somewhat erratic (and it's literally made clear MC knows this since as soon as first messages), thus go from "0 to 100", the game is trying to have it's own identity (que a lot of retro game inspiration), etc. Literally the ground work is set from the beggining, if you like the first chapter you'll like the game because it clearly established what it's trying to do since the beggining, if you don't then its not for you but outside of technical aspects the game delivers on its intent.

One of my fave NTR games, some of the best mechanics out there, with some of the most established characterization for FMCs. Sadly bugs and language parts still need some work, but given devs a rookie that'll likely improve over time and not really what I'd consider a major game fault.

It is a tough game to review because i feel like only a small group of people will like it because you will have to like ai art, ntr, AND you won't have to mind that it's a vn with 0 gameplay other than a few route choices, but hey, apparently i'm one of those people.
I kinda liked the art because of the main character (which also reminds me of ratatatat74's art which is one of my fav artist), and btw i don't like ai generated art specially in h-games and i don't usually play anything here with the aicg tag, but even if some of the cg looked a little bit weird sometimes, overall i enjoyed it.

so yeah, niche game but fun times.

Can't wait for more updates...love the cheating path and cuck path but for cheating wish there was like a "her POV" side to it as well. If that gets added 100% would be a 5 star for me! Keep up the good work!

P.S. make it a zip plz so i can move it and del from downloads folder <3

So it's pretty hot, the art is fun and the situations are exciting. But.
There is no consistency or characterization or even plot.
You're a couple separated by distance, is there any teasing, longing, unanswered questions? No, she just fucked three guys.
Next chapter, oh she's teasing you now, ah, you're her cuck and you like her taking the lead. No, now she calls you daddy and does what you say.

Please fix character consistencies, choices and story paths, then you have something great.

Some coding problems which i've seen developer is trying to fix and update. Still the writing and the netorase is so good. I wish with more supporters this guy will show he's real talent. Game is 4/5 and i wanna belive on next updates

great start, lots of potential here. Interface can be a little slow at times and replay ability is affected as such (and youre going to want to replay it because there are different dialogues and endings based on your choices - which is a really good thing!)

This game has potential. Now the game is divided into several plots and each plot is not completed, without creating any transition from one to the second, however, if you turn off the brain now, it's quite good, we're not looking for a lot of sense in games for fap.
(but I would really like the decisions of the first part to influence the second part later and add more dialogues so that everything looks harmonious)

The story and pictures are pretty nice. Considering that it's still in it's demo phase means there's room to improve. Hopefully in the future there's more to this and it's less pixelated, but otherwise right now it gets the job done

The art style got me to download this, and it might be the only redeemable thing about this game. Even then, not everyone is going to enjoy it; It's just AI art with a filter over it.
Even the story feels AI generated; It's not compelling, it barely makes sense, and there's no character development or direction.

This feels like a perfect example of someone who created some AI art, and did the bare minimum to be able to get people to pay them on Patreon for it. Soulless.

1 star is too much for this game.

I played Chapter 1 and after 2 minutes of gameplay , girlfriend starts sending photos of her getting gangbanged and the boyfriend writes her a message like "Please don't leave me i like it" or something similar.... Zero build up , zero character development, i really thought the developer made girlfriend bipolar or something. So what's the point in playing other chapters when in chapter 1 you get this writing.

For NTR story to have any sense you need to establish relationship between girlfriend and boyfriend, wife and husband.... You have to tell us why girlfriend want to sleep around , why boyfriend wants to stay with slutty girlfriend.... Not just show us girlfriend getting gangbanged after 2 minutes of reading text messages between her and her boyfriend...

To be honest, I really like this game. The dialogues are okay, but I think there is room for improvement, such as adding more options or different scenes—for example, routes like Netorare, Netorase, or Netori. I don't mind whether the art is AI-generated or not; I just appreciate work that is done well and with passion (though I do miss some hair down there). However, what really makes me give this game a low rating is the lack of configuration options, like resolution, text speed, and skip options, as well as the number of bugs that make it a terrible experience for someone playing for the first time.

Art: 5/10 (A.I.)
Dialogue: 4/10
Gameplay: 10/10 (You just pick a dialogue, so there isn't much room for error)

For a first game, I'll say it's not horrible, far from it actually. But it's clunky, lacking and in all honesty boring. The initial release shouldn't have had any H in it, it takes away from the time that could've been used to flash out both the MC and Felicia, along with the fact the game itself barely has any real dialogue that's anything more than surface value fluff to make this a game and not just a downloadable batch of NTR art.

Take the time to develop the characters more then focus on the art, simply put making the chapters at least 20 minutes long should be priority over multiple routes with art for each one, thugh I would personally attempt to make each chapter 40 minutes long, keep it both relatively short and low effort while giving a reason to READ the 'messages' instead of just ape brain clicking until chapter done and images available. Still, despite it's short comings, for what seems to be a first time developer making a pet project, this is decent which proves you did care about the game.


6/10~5.5/10, slighlty below average, but admirable effort

~~~This is a repost of my previous review in the discussion thread, felt I needed to add it here as well.~~~

Review as of version 0.3A

I'm going to be a bit of a contrarian when it comes to my review. I think there is a lot of charm going for this game, the pixel art style mixed with the AI generated art. The AI generated art is not that bad, especially when compared to other games on this platform, and the main heroine appearance remains consistent and aesthetically enjoyable.

However, others are correct when they talk about the pacing of the game. Within the first few messages your character goes from her boyfriend, to almost being broken up with, to cuck. I appreciate games that don't overstay their welcome but this is definitely way too fast of a tempo. The writing in this regard can be improved a lot and build a more proper storyline and development of the heroine. On top of this, the text being sent all at one also detracts from the game's tempo, it's like the book opened itself to the last page showing the climax of the story as I have to turn back to the "start" of it. If the text comes slower or the screen doesn't go to the end, the payoff of the images will remain intact.

For a quick fun game, it's not too bad, I think calling this a demo is accurate. While there is a lot of potential for this game to be unique among it's phone text genre, it's going to need a lot more content and sustenance to appeal to the larger audience; especially when it has stiff competition.

Overall, I look forward to revisiting this game's development. I suspect the development will progress quickly, I just hope by the end of it there is a suitable length game to give it credit.

There's literally no game here. This isn't a demo, this isn't a proof of concept, this is absolutely nothing. Especially with the context that the images are AI like seriously there's 2 minutes of content and like 5 pictures just generate some more. Like how can you double dip on being this lazy I could make a couple hours of content like this with $5 in credits for an AI software and like a day or two of work. Didn't have the glitch other people were mentioning when I played on mobile but honestly probably would've had a better time of I had the glitch so it would seem mildly funny

I do want to echo what others have said, but I'll also add some of my own thoughts as well.

Yeah the scrolling ALL THE WAY TO THE BOTTOM after EVERY message is so infuriating, I don't know if this is a bug or somehow intentional but it's by far the most annoying part of the game.

As for the character, Felicia, she's okay. The art is fine for being AI generated, but the MC is just the worst. I enjoy NTR games, Netorase sometimes among them, but the MC rolling over immediately and Felicia, after~2 days in game time(?) wanting to dump you just totally takes you out of it.

The best stories are the ones where we see the fall from the beginning and are forced to watch, usually helpless to do anything. That being said, even for a demo, this was stupidly rushed. You click like four messages and is A) Felicia is already corrupted and B) the demo is already over.

As far as a proof of concept goes, or an alpha version of a demo goes, it's fine. There's no real reason to play it, to be honest. I hope that in the future updates, the creator can implement A LOT more build up.

The interface itself is just kinda fine, the text is a little hard to read at times but otherwise it's okay. Probably the best artistic direction in the actual game thus far.

Also, the Overview being "navigate the balance between trust and suspicion as Felicia's stories don't quite add up" when, after three or so days in game, she dumps you and sends pictures of her getting fucked is ridiculous. Maybe the full version will have some amount of storytelling like that, but this demo does not and that should be reflected in the overview.

I want to end this by saying this to the dev, don't give up on this. I enjoy these kinds of NTR stories the most, and I think you have the grounds for something really special here. Keep going, just build on what I and others have said by adding build up, more and better dialogue, maybe even a few more characters, and so forth.

I do wish the best of luck to you Dev, and I hope that you can create something magical.

Review as of v0.1A Demo.


Lets start off with what I like about this. The art. Even if it is AI Generated, is pretty decent from the horrid stuff I've seen from others. It's also pretty consistant with her proportions, which is another plus that other AI Generated games don't compare to.

Now sadly, for the things that I dislike about this. Holy smokes the fact that you have to scroll down after EVERY single dialogue option that you chose is beyond mind-boggling. I understand that coding isn't for everyone but please try to fix this.

The story is .... pointless? Your GF suddenly just turns from loving you to wanting to break up in 0.5 nanoseconds. There basically is no story. I hate insta turn-arounds like this. So please. Even if this is a netorase game, which it is, make sure that there is some build-up to it. No one likes to watch instant slutiffication just because.... nothing, really.

I hope the dev can improve this game and the engine, since it has plenty of potential to be a great NTS game.

I understand that it's first-time demo but that should not be an excuse for not putting in at least some more effort.

1) Every time you respond to message, you have to scroll all the way down.
2) Felicia's AI-generated design is fairly decent but she goes 0 to 100 almost instantly which would be understandable for wanting to showcase what demo has to offer.
But... if you are using AI-generated art, you will need something better.
There is pretty much no build-up or anything that would make players return to see what a new update brought.