A bit too much shaking all over. It makes it harder to read when the words shake and it made it hard to really see the art when Tucker got chased by the T-Rex. In the kitchen after the Birthday CG Maddies hair outline struggles a bit with the Background. The expressions could need a bit more work. The whole Family Looks empty inside. Something about the eyes sadly I don't know what exactly could be done, but I would suggest to take another look at them. Expressions do so much during dialogue. Sam's expressions during her locker room CG's on the other Hand are great and so much fun. It makes her so much more Lively and hot. Danny after that doesn't even blush or Looks embarrassed or stunned in a good way.
I, of Course, didn't expect much of an first release, but that was surprisingly short. The art is amazing, besides the lack of expressions. Writing is okay, too early to say, but I was positive surprised that we didn't get detention and there was a bit of Character development going on between the series and your game. I suggest deleting the line of the planned first release. So much time later for so little content doesn't build confidence. So maybe you want to keep that a bit more hidden, but it's very honest atm which is nice.
I, of Course, didn't expect much of an first release, but that was surprisingly short. The art is amazing, besides the lack of expressions. Writing is okay, too early to say, but I was positive surprised that we didn't get detention and there was a bit of Character development going on between the series and your game. I suggest deleting the line of the planned first release. So much time later for so little content doesn't build confidence. So maybe you want to keep that a bit more hidden, but it's very honest atm which is nice.
