VN - Ren'Py - Completed - Debbie [v0.5] [eHellJay]

There's a difference between a game and the characters in the game.

For the most part I enjoyed this game, though I do feel like it ended too abruptly. I would have liked to have seen the fallout from the characters actions, but this is just a minor quibble.

As for the characters, in the Dev's previous game It Could Be Worse, the wife in the couple had, I feel, some justification for possibly cheating, the husband was a fool that didn't appreciate the wife he had. In this game, not so much, the wife was completely at fault IMHO.

Summary: very short kinetic novel. The dialogues are well written and erotic. Renderings are lacking in both quantity and quality.

# Review #

The images are a bit lacking, not just for the quality that seems very dated, but also for the quantity not sufficient to accompany the dialogues and descriptions. Many passages are left to the imagination of the reader. The visual is the weaker point.

The dialogues and the story are well written. Apart from some grammatical errors. Nothing original but still the erotic tension is there. But the story is very short, it can be read in maximum 30 minutes.

There are no possible choices or variations, the plot is unique and flows like a comic. Kinetic novel should be the right term. But it is still enjoyable.
There is no main male or female protagonist, it's just a plain story of two people meeting after some years, you read it as it were a book.

The ending seems to imply that the plan was to make a longer story but the developer changed idea. A bad closing in my opinion.

It's still enjoyable to read, so my advice is to download it keeping in mind the considerations above.

Story: 3/5
Eroticism and dialogues: 4/5
Graphics: 2/5
Overall: 3.5/5

That ending is garbage.

A teaser for a possible sequel would have sufficed to interest and whet our appetites--even if it isn't in the cards, fucking lie to us--but no, just straight up shut it down after that cliffhanger. Why even add that bit suggesting they're being watched if you don't intend on following through?

Three stars. Both stars removed for that appalling "won't be continued" bullshit after the suggestion that they were being watched.

Pure kinetic short novel with beautiful female MC. Just a slice of life with good dialogues, including internal ones – for instance, I like Debbie’s dilemmas, apparent growing desire and, in fact, self-deception. Ken’s motives are more obvious from the beginning but are also presented in a credible way. The sex scenes are good - sensual and arousing.

What I don’t like? Quality of renders could (or should) be better. The plot ends abruptly – I understand that the dev wanted to finalise (at least in some way) the game, but the effect is not convincing. The cliffhanger may suggest that the dev’s original idea for the story was more ambitious… It’s a pity we do not have a continuation and / or more paths or options. Nevertheless, I do not regret the time spent with Debbie and I am ready to give the game well-deserved four stars.

Short game, kinetic novel, but I really enjoyed it.
The story is very simple and mostly lasts one evening, with a wife falling for a former friend. But the seduction is very well done, full of lust and desire. The sex scene is very well written and extremely sensual. Renders are decent and some are even very good. A couple of animations. Great work on the audio track. Attractive characters.
Not a really ambitious novel, but I enjoyed spending a couple of hours with Debbie.
Warmly recommended.

the title follows the game to the letter, in fact I think you couldn't do worse, you didn't understand anything about the game, piloted answers, usual slutty wife, husband usually incomplete and non-existent. passive game, A pure kinetic, but with a childish plot, his third game, but the Dev has not understood that it is not a good thing for him to make games, it is not the field, we are not just talking about the graphic side, or sound, but he writes the plots like a 15 year old boy.

One hell of a storyline. One of the best VNs I played recently. The anticipation is real. The dialogues are well written. Debbie looks hot. Overall, if you are looking for a slow buring kinetic novel, download this asap.