The amount of attention given to this title is quite impressive.
Story, Renders, Character arcs are all top shelf material. When I was checking out the description of this VN, it looked too good on the surface. But damn have you delivered.
I'm loving the mystery side of the story, very immersive. I can see how much effort you're putting into trying to satisfy all types of readers. And to be honest, I think you've knocked it out of the park.
I'm not one for the lewd scenes, so I for one, appreciate the liberty you give your reader to keep it at a strict minimum should one chose to do so. So thank you for that.
So aside from a few literary mistakes (which I'm not really bothered to enumerate), you've done a stellar job concentrating on the story content. Just one tiny suggestion though, I'd relax on the word "whilst". I've only noted 3 instances where it's actually correct to use. And many other times where it's just out of place. other than that 6/5 stars if that rating would be possible.
Keep up the fantastic work.
A title absolutely worth getting.
Eagerly waiting for more.
Story, Renders, Character arcs are all top shelf material. When I was checking out the description of this VN, it looked too good on the surface. But damn have you delivered.
I'm loving the mystery side of the story, very immersive. I can see how much effort you're putting into trying to satisfy all types of readers. And to be honest, I think you've knocked it out of the park.
I'm not one for the lewd scenes, so I for one, appreciate the liberty you give your reader to keep it at a strict minimum should one chose to do so. So thank you for that.
So aside from a few literary mistakes (which I'm not really bothered to enumerate), you've done a stellar job concentrating on the story content. Just one tiny suggestion though, I'd relax on the word "whilst". I've only noted 3 instances where it's actually correct to use. And many other times where it's just out of place. other than that 6/5 stars if that rating would be possible.
Keep up the fantastic work.
A title absolutely worth getting.
Eagerly waiting for more.