ravenswinus

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The "benefit" is that anyone would be able to put a virus into this "full save" of theirs that they downloaded and hack their pc. I guess that's what they're looking forward: being hacked.




And I will remind you that A Tale of Two Cities was serialised in a WEEKLY magazine. So people read a new chapter every week, and they used to take a week to read it while they were reading the rest of the magazine as well.

And... this is not a novel, but a RPG.
Two Cities was only published weekly to fit the magazine it was in. The rest were montly.

Regardless, the point remains the same. The Zygernic effect is a powerful psychological phenomenon that's going to draw readers of both spank games and novels back after a cliff-hanger.
 

rengohengo94

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My opinion on Leslie is that by this last update, she's ready. Breadman is fully entitled to write the game how he wants, but I'm simply critiquing based on that writing. Leslie's emotional and mental headspace has her unapologetically seeing her relationship with Jon as a woman first and a mother second. There's no justifications, excuses or rationalizations now for her sexual attraction, she enthusiastically fellates him and eagerly drinks his cum. She grinds on his cock until she orgasms. She fondles him and lets him fondle her. They talk and flirt like a sexually active couple, sleep together and shower together.The question of crossing that line is mostly framed for her in a romantic way rather than a taboo way. She's so far into it that she's come around to realizing she should be polyamorous with every other woman. Lilith got her to flat out say she wanted to have sex with Jon, that it'd be good, and it would be emotionally fulfilling.

At this point, her withholding until v0.10 feels artificial, unfortunately, like it's being dragged out when there's no real reason to. There needs to be some narrative obstacle introduced to further justify her reservations. Which, I'd be fine with, tbh. I like a slow burn if it makes sense. Maybe Jon's father finds out, where he calls her out on the situation being strange from an outsider perspective would be a big enough bit of friction to slow it down logically, and she has to come around to going after what she wants, damn the consequences. But otherwise, this is in the danger zone of being dragged out, and I really don't want that.
the prooblem with the obstacle we already had it relativly early on, having a situation like this agaaain would just feel bad she litterly has to be taken out of comission LUL but apprently when every update is supposoed to have SOME leslie scenes that isnt poossible either? kinda wrote himself into a corner by putting to many tease non penetration scenes in if you ask me
 

ravenswinus

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My opinion on Leslie is that by this last update, she's ready. Breadman is fully entitled to write the game how he wants, but I'm simply critiquing based on that writing. Leslie's emotional and mental headspace has her unapologetically seeing her relationship with Jon as a woman first and a mother second. There's no justifications, excuses or rationalizations now for her sexual attraction, she enthusiastically fellates him and eagerly drinks his cum. She grinds on his cock until she orgasms. She fondles him and lets him fondle her. They talk and flirt like a sexually active couple, sleep together and shower together.The question of crossing that line is mostly framed for her in a romantic way rather than a taboo way. She's so far into it that she's come around to realizing she should be polyamorous with every other woman. Lilith got her to flat out say she wanted to have sex with Jon, that it'd be good, and it would be emotionally fulfilling.

At this point, her withholding until v0.10 feels artificial, unfortunately, like it's being dragged out when there's no real reason to. There needs to be some narrative obstacle introduced to further justify her reservations. Which, I'd be fine with, tbh. I like a slow burn if it makes sense. Maybe Jon's father finds out, where he calls her out on the situation being strange from an outsider perspective would be a big enough bit of friction to slow it down logically, and she has to come around to going after what she wants, damn the consequences. But otherwise, this is in the danger zone of being dragged out, and I really don't want that.
Yes, and no. Leslie is more than ready but there are two other family members in front of her. Cassie gets it this update, then Ashley in 8.5.

This is most likely my inner-perv wishing here, but I bet Leslie hears about how good it is from Ash and Cass before doing the deed. There will also most likely be a threesome with family members before full penetration.

Everybody is focusing on .10 without adding the -ish at the end. I figure it'll be 9.5 since that is .10ish and family updates are the .5s. So Cass, Ash, Leslie probably in that order.
 

Ottoeight

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Two Cities was only published weekly to fit the magazine it was in. The rest were montly.

Regardless, the point remains the same. The Zygernic effect is a powerful psychological phenomenon that's going to draw readers of both spank games and novels back after a cliff-hanger.
Whatever makes you feel good, bro. Whatever.

Every fucking thread is full of people like you: always to the rescue.
 
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