VN - Ren'Py - Completed - Depth's Revival [Final Stories] [Seacth]

[Rev @ Ch. 2]

Art's nice, girls are good looking.

Writing needs work. Scenario is common, narrative is contrived and voice is thin. It's a disjointed sequence of things just happening to the MC, and the lack of buildup or agency makes the proceedings feel inconsequential. I like the characterization, but that could use more expansion as well.

Porn's alright, but again the lack of gravity in the plot makes it less interesting than it could be.

TLDR: Spending a bit more time on the writing would improve quality by a ton. Godspeed~

[Edit @ Depth's Revival Ch. 9 Part 1]

Bumping this to 4 stars via subjective enjoyment.

Art is still nice, but likely gets bonus points because it hits many entries in my kinkset.

Writing voice and characterization has improved since my original review, but the narrative is a bit inconsistent and silly. Porn has also gotten better, but again I'm likely being more nice because preggo fetish. Do very much wish for more girl/girl or even just more convincing interpersonal scenes to bring across the harem life without seeming like a bunch of chicks that happen to be in the same place.

TLDR2: Gettin better~

While I agree this release of the game had me start a new game due to the changes that have been made.

I don't think this is a bad thing this early into the development of the game as long as the changes were made to make the game better. In this regards, I think developer has got someone to proofread the dialog and text and this clearly is better than the first release.

Most of the content so far is in dream format (as at release 1) but does show some promise especially if playing the patched version.

It is still early into this game but I feel it does have some potential.

As of the current update I have to say that the dev has made some fairly good improvements to this VN.
PROS
Good story
Renders are getting better
Models are weird, but attractive
CONS
Still small grammar mistakes
OVERALL
My first rating on this VN was 3/5 because of the issues that were present. The dev took their time and addressed most of the grammar mistakes, and this proves that they are willing to acknowledge the issues and correct them. Keep up the good work, and I look forward to the dev getting better as they go.

I must say the game story has improved a lot since 1st release . The scenes looks better. The developer is trying to improve for sure. The overall quality has improved since the early releases. Have potential. But needs a bit more work. But I still think the dev should change the protagonist penis type.