VN - Ren'Py - Depth's Revival [Rework] [Seacth]

The story of this game is nice. I would give the advice: lesser number of women, but deeper relationships and more quality time with them. Often the story jump very fast from one date to the next. Sometimes i feel to get lost how many girls the MCs is able to have sexual intercourse. The quality of the graphic could become better, and the girls should look more different not only different hair colors. Anyway this is a really good game which makes fun. Keep on impoving it and it will become a great game.

It's got some quality renders and some really stand out as unique, that's a plus. Hellooooooo Kaylie.
It could use a walkthrough or something because only some of the dialogue is obvious for certain paths, some is a guessing game of what the hell does this lead to.
Overall it's... average. It's got definite pluses in it's renders, credit for not cut and pasting the same generic women. It's got some minuses in you can end up playing the 'What dialogue/action guess I can make shows me what I want and what guess just made me waste 5 minutes for nothing' minigame some games like to play.
I would say, in general if you haven't, give it a go. I think it's got more plus than minus and down the road it might gain some direction in game play but right now it does have some solid renders you won't see elsewhere.
3 with hopes it rises to 4 or more as it develops.

I love everything about this game. Been checkin it out for a while and now I think I should review it. I don't normally review games but this game has such less reviews.

Story: It's not a such unique story but It's fun to read and I enjoyed all the things happening.

Characters: I think this is where the game shines most. Every character looks different and has their own characteristic attributes and they are all beautiful in their own ways.

UI/Graphics: UI design needs work it uses the default renpy style but I don't really care about the way UI looks. The graphics are all good they look way better on the latest updates. There are some clipping issues here and there.

Overall: It's a fun game that has already enough content to please most of the people looking forward to the next chapters ^^
(I'm not a native English speaker forgive my bad writing. )

Damn Loved the cliff hanger!/ending.

First you had me smitten with a hot and totally cute chubby doll, followed by the dominating Imogen which was done so damn well, then you snared me tighter with a hot preggo plaything partner/friend of Imogen that wants you to breed her next time then bam finally you got a solid story and great dialogue so isn't another cookie cutter harem fare. Well fucking done @Seacth this is officially in my top 5 favorites now. Seriously can't wait for more. Thanks again

That post explains most of what I love about this vn
.also love all of the LIs, the mystery and action in the story and I really enjoy the art. It's still early or I would have put 5 stars. I honestly feel this is a great vn in the making

While my rating may not reflect it as much as I would like I actually enjoyed the current content and look forward to more.

5.4/10 - overall rating (breakdown below)

7/10 - story (The story has a lot of promise and I found myself wanting to keep playing when I had to log off.

4/10 - character design (I have mixed feelings about this rating. While I really like the design of some of the girls it seems like there was more effort put into designing some of the side girls making them cuter than the main ones. The teacher and mother both have a cute face but the specific design for the irises the dev chose kinda makes them look like zombie eyes from The Walking Dead just with more colour when getting a close up of their face. I really like the design for the subconscious and I'm a huge fan of heterochromia I just thing using different irises would have made a huge difference with her. While all boobs are good I personally prefer the smaller ones and I have to say the Seacth did a good job on those making them look like proper small breasts. A lot of devs thst use illusion products to make their games tend to make small boobs look like small out of place tumors with nipples. Found a lot of clipping in the renders as well.)

6/10 - character personalities (I like the personalities of the main girls. They are sweet and warm. I really like the sarcastic side of Sarah and how its like she's that way to cover up her own insecurities. Only reason I didn't rate this higher was for some of the girl it just seemed like progression was too fast especially with the teacher.)

5/10 - animations (The animations themselves weren't bad and used in a nice way but I found almost all animations especially the ones where the woman cums is super jumpy. I'm not talking about them shaking but more like there were a bunch of frames deleted)

5/10 - environmental (Buildings and design were nice with decent detail but on multiple occasions it looked like the edge of the world was behind a specific building or when indoors a lot of times there would be no environment outside the window leaving only the sky box. Looked like place was floating in the sky.)

Good Points
+ Render and animation quality are good, and we animation physics are well-made as well, and the art style is not bad either, we have kind of unique and interesting character designs.

Bad Points
- Story and story-telling are badly written, and not interesting.
- Dialogues, story, and relationship developments with girls/women feel rushed and make no sense.
- While having sex women/girls facial expressions look kind of weird.

For The End
This was one of the games that had great potential years ago, but with its current state, it's nothing more than a 2-2.5 stars rate quick-fap game.

[Rev @ Ch. 2]

Art's nice, girls are good looking.

Writing needs work. Scenario is common, narrative is contrived and voice is thin. It's a disjointed sequence of things just happening to the MC, and the lack of buildup or agency makes the proceedings feel inconsequential. I like the characterization, but that could use more expansion as well.

Porn's alright, but again the lack of gravity in the plot makes it less interesting than it could be.

TLDR: Spending a bit more time on the writing would improve quality by a ton. Godspeed~

[Edit @ Depth's Revival Ch. 9 Part 1]

Bumping this to 4 stars via subjective enjoyment.

Art is still nice, but likely gets bonus points because it hits many entries in my kinkset.

Writing voice and characterization has improved since my original review, but the narrative is a bit inconsistent and silly. Porn has also gotten better, but again I'm likely being more nice because preggo fetish. Do very much wish for more girl/girl or even just more convincing interpersonal scenes to bring across the harem life without seeming like a bunch of chicks that happen to be in the same place.

TLDR2: Gettin better~

While I agree this release of the game had me start a new game due to the changes that have been made.

I don't think this is a bad thing this early into the development of the game as long as the changes were made to make the game better. In this regards, I think developer has got someone to proofread the dialog and text and this clearly is better than the first release.

Most of the content so far is in dream format (as at release 1) but does show some promise especially if playing the patched version.

It is still early into this game but I feel it does have some potential.

As of the current update I have to say that the dev has made some fairly good improvements to this VN.
PROS
Good story
Renders are getting better
Models are weird, but attractive
CONS
Still small grammar mistakes
OVERALL
My first rating on this VN was 3/5 because of the issues that were present. The dev took their time and addressed most of the grammar mistakes, and this proves that they are willing to acknowledge the issues and correct them. Keep up the good work, and I look forward to the dev getting better as they go.

I must say the game story has improved a lot since 1st release . The scenes looks better. The developer is trying to improve for sure. The overall quality has improved since the early releases. Have potential. But needs a bit more work. But I still think the dev should change the protagonist penis type.