Ren'Py Desire at a Distance [v0.3] [AlexanderMad]

[ItsNotUs]

In general, I posted the games here, mostly for myself personally. I learned to program from scratch, generate art, in general, a lot of things. I came up with excellent mechanics, but, unfortunately, no one likes AI arts, and who am I to go against the will of the people? So, there will most likely not be a next version. Although I already have everything ready. All that remains is to write the text and add images.Thank you all for your opinion. I really didn’t see any constructive shouting. I'll do something else.)
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I didn’t see any great mechanics in this project!
The menu in the saves is blurry, you need to make a higher resolution so that we can clearly see the letters when save the game, the save image is stretched, but this can all be fixed!
I would like to see the function of the effect when you click on the photo it opens in full screen like in other similar projects, it would be nice to have a gallery function! I liked the selection function, you freely use the mouse wheel to scroll the message up and the selection remains in one place.
You know, i'm not a "fan" of AI, but the model you came up with looks great, a young slender blonde with wide hips and big tits, it’s a crime to leave her alone at home, much less abandon a project!
Wait, release a couple more updates, work on the story! Your story is not clear, there is no prologue, we only learn that the husband went on a business trip to earn money for a long time from the description of the game in the thread + the demo is small and it’s not clear what other mechanics you’ll offer.
I honestly didn’t understand what choice i had to make to follow one of the paths, if I understood correctly you want to make three paths Vanilla, NTS and NTR. There are very few games like this and the fact that you decided to do something like that is cool, you have the opportunity to do something more unique, but again you need to think through and work out the plot! If MC ignore wife’s messages, she gets angry and teases the pizza delivery guy, i think this choice should lead to NTR and so MC orders pizza himself and it turns out it’s more like NTS!

In general, it’s too early to talk about anything specific, we need more updates to understand where the story will go, and MC’s wife looks cool, it will be a pity if you abandon your project!

Ну если уж так случится, что ты все таки забросишь проект скинь зип файл с картинками/

 

[Alexy Jade]

I'll make a port, not all at once. I went on vacation after the release, so I didn’t have time to release it. There will be an Android version.

No, don't be discouraged my friend... I like the game and it looks promising... it needs some polishing, don't be discouraged and ignore the bad and hateful comments and keep going.

 

[ahningxue]

Explode Jugs!

 

[damnthatwascrazy]

While I understand that this might be your first effort, let's be real:

- Your "hand-drawn" AI art isn't even release-ready - it's flawed and inconsistent, read people's comments.
- It takes more than just a set of AI images to make a game and your writing is... it needs much more effort to be put into it to say the least. At the moment it's clear you have no understanding of how to write an engaging game script or even a normal conversation between a couple (it comes with experience tho).
- The attitude you demonstrate towards the feedback and critique is immature and will hurt you as a developer in a long run.

All in all, it's a very lazy first attempt with half baked ai pics and terrible dialogue. There are dozens of demos like this already, yours isn't unique.

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[AsianGFModels.com]

Messed up body parts is one of the problems (among many) of AI.

 

[AlexanderrMad]

Dear lovers of perfect anatomy, I built everything from scratch, fueled purely by enthusiasm, with no money in my pocket, just a passion for creating and sharing. I didn't sell my soul for cash—I just enjoyed the process!


If you’re looking for anatomically flawless masterpieces, you might want to check elsewhere. People come here not for medical textbooks but to relax, have fun, and enjoy some creativity.


Oh, and here’s a challenge: find an extra arm or leg in my generation, and I’ll give you $100! Good luck, detectives!

 

[AlexanderrMad]

I didn’t see any great mechanics in this project!
The menu in the saves is blurry, you need to make a higher resolution so that we can clearly see the letters when save the game, the save image is stretched, but this can all be fixed!
I would like to see the function of the effect when you click on the photo it opens in full screen like in other similar projects, it would be nice to have a gallery function! I liked the selection function, you freely use the mouse wheel to scroll the message up and the selection remains in one place.
You know, i'm not a "fan" of AI, but the model you came up with looks great, a young slender blonde with wide hips and big tits, it’s a crime to leave her alone at home, much less abandon a project!
Wait, release a couple more updates, work on the story! Your story is not clear, there is no prologue, we only learn that the husband went on a business trip to earn money for a long time from the description of the game in the thread + the demo is small and it’s not clear what other mechanics you’ll offer.
I honestly didn’t understand what choice i had to make to follow one of the paths, if I understood correctly you want to make three paths Vanilla, NTS and NTR. There are very few games like this and the fact that you decided to do something like that is cool, you have the opportunity to do something more unique, but again you need to think through and work out the plot! If MC ignore wife’s messages, she gets angry and teases the pizza delivery guy, i think this choice should lead to NTR and so MC orders pizza himself and it turns out it’s more like NTS!

In general, it’s too early to talk about anything specific, we need more updates to understand where the story will go, and MC’s wife looks cool, it will be a pity if you abandon your project!

Ну если уж так случится, что ты все таки забросишь проект скинь зип файл с картинками/

Reply:


Wow, so much effort to find flaws in a passion project that’s only at version 0.3 – that’s some real dedication! You must be a true fan of my work to spend this much time analyzing it.


But hey, since you’re so good at dissecting other people’s projects, why not share yours? I’d be happy to check it out! I can even throw in a script for you – consider it a little gift for my favorite internet critic.


the game remembers every choice, has hidden points that affect the acts (and there will be at least three). So yes, your decisions actually matter!


And if you expected a fully polished AAA masterpiece with cinematic cutscenes, a Hollywood-tier storyline, and flawless anatomy from version 0.3, I’m afraid you might have slightly overestimated my resources.


Thank you for your comment! Your critique is actually constructive and useful. If you're interested, you're welcome to work with me—I’m always open to improvement and collaboration! My contact details are on the cover.

 

[SamualHand]

Dear lovers of perfect anatomy, I built everything from scratch, fueled purely by enthusiasm, with no money in my pocket, just a passion for creating and sharing. I didn't sell my soul for cash—I just enjoyed the process!

That is why you have a Petreon?! To fuel your passion? I know I know, I have the same thing, it's called a job. But perfect when it's your passion. But if you want paying patreons, you have to live with critism and you could use it to improve. Don't be active on a honest pirate site, when you don't want honest pirates feedback.
You want to use it for marketing, you can do it, but people will give you feedback about your hand drawn spider, pussy, giant tit women, if you want it or not...

 

[AlexanderrMad]

Messed up body parts is one of the problems (among many) of AI.

Oh, so you found a mistake? Great! Welcome to our challenge! If you spotted an extra arm, leg, or something straight out of "What’s Wrong With This Picture?", show me! You can find where to contact me on the game’s cover – I’m waiting for your detective work.


And remember: $100 is waiting for its hero!

 

[AlexanderrMad]

That is why you have a Petreon?! To fuel your passion? I know I know, I have the same thing, it's called a job. But perfect when it's your passion. But if you want paying patreons, you have to live with critism and you could use it to improve. Don't be active on a honest pirate site, when you don't want honest pirates feedback.
You want to use it for marketing, you can do it, but people will give you feedback about your hand drawn spider, pussy, giant tit women, if you want it or not...

You can check the creation date of my Patreon – it's been around for 6 years. I was making videos back then, and I’m still doing it now.

And here’s the best part: the game subscription is free! You can subscribe right now and enjoy all the content, no questions asked.

 

[AlexanderrMad]

I’ll repeat myself: I’m making this game out of pure enthusiasm. I learned all of this from scratch and shared it with you. If something bothers you, why not go check out what you actually like? People are messaging me asking for the continuation — everyone has their own tastes, isn’t that clear?

I get your opinion, but why lie? Where are the extra arms or legs? The art isn’t perfect, I agree, but I promise that my next game will be made with a professional artist. Right now, I’m just asking you not to yell things like “But it’s AI, oh my god!” Just take a look — if you don’t like it, I’m not forcing you to play.

Again, I’ve released the prologue completely for free and I’ll be updating regularly, for free. I can’t release a game with this content without a subscription, or I risk getting banned from the platform. And, by the way, I’m working on more than just the game. The game will be released a couple of weeks early for patrons, but it will also be available online later.

 

[AlexanderrMad]

That is why you have a Petreon?! To fuel your passion? I know I know, I have the same thing, it's called a job. But perfect when it's your passion. But if you want paying patreons, you have to live with critism and you could use it to improve. Don't be active on a honest pirate site, when you don't want honest pirates feedback.
You want to use it for marketing, you can do it, but people will give you feedback about your hand drawn spider, pussy, giant tit women, if you want it or not...

By the way, SWIFT is not available in Russia, so I literally can’t withdraw money. Nothing works for me without a VPN. If you’re curious, feel free to look it up.

I haven’t been able to withdraw money from abroad for about three years now. So yes, everything is done purely out of enthusiasm.

 

[AlexanderrMad]

While I understand that this might be your first effort, let's be real:

- Your "hand-drawn" AI art isn't even release-ready - it's flawed and inconsistent, read people's comments.
- It takes more than just a set of AI images to make a game and your writing is... it needs much more effort to be put into it to say the least. At the moment it's clear you have no understanding of how to write an engaging game script or even a normal conversation between a couple (it comes with experience tho).
- The attitude you demonstrate towards the feedback and critique is immature and will hurt you as a developer in a long run.

All in all, it's a very lazy first attempt with half baked ai pics and terrible dialogue. There are dozens of demos like this already, yours isn't unique.

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Are you sure this is how you want to spend your time—hunting for flaws in someone else’s work? I mean, out of all the things you could be doing, this is the hill you choose to die on?

Also, are you sure this is the right place for that? Because last time I checked, people come here to relax and enjoy, not to run CSI: AI Art Edition.
Also, just a quick reminder—this is only version 0.3. Why take it so seriously? It's a work in progress, not a finished masterpiece. Relax, enjoy, or just check back later when there's more to see!

 

[Thekyo240]

At last, I understand why so many exceptional games are abandoned by their creators during development. It's due to the throngs of individuals who unabashedly use pirated copies yet incessantly criticise the developers. If you have supported the creators and offer suggestions, that is acceptable. However, if you have contributed nothing, please hold your tongue.

 

[SamualHand]

Yeah I agree 100% with you Thekyo240, it's totally OK if the developer is pretending it's hand drawn, when it's actually not. Who bother about the details when you can have boobies?! Right! It's about the fun!

 

[damnthatwascrazy]

Are you sure this is how you want to spend your time—hunting for flaws in someone else’s work? I mean, out of all the things you could be doing, this is the hill you choose to die on?

Also, are you sure this is the right place for that? Because last time I checked, people come here to relax and enjoy, not to run CSI: AI Art Edition.
Also, just a quick reminder—this is only version 0.3. Why take it so seriously? It's a work in progress, not a finished masterpiece. Relax, enjoy, or just check back later when there's more to see!

The only one who's dying here is you, dude. Along with your lazy slop.
No worries, our fragile friend, I just clicked 'Ignore' on your name and this thread.

 

[ItsNotUs]

Reply:


Wow, so much effort to find flaws in a passion project that’s only at version 0.3 – that’s some real dedication! You must be a true fan of my work to spend this much time analyzing it.


But hey, since you’re so good at dissecting other people’s projects, why not share yours? I’d be happy to check it out! I can even throw in a script for you – consider it a little gift for my favorite internet critic.


the game remembers every choice, has hidden points that affect the acts (and there will be at least three). So yes, your decisions actually matter!


And if you expected a fully polished AAA masterpiece with cinematic cutscenes, a Hollywood-tier storyline, and flawless anatomy from version 0.3, I’m afraid you might have slightly overestimated my resources.


Thank you for your comment! Your critique is actually constructive and useful. If you're interested, you're welcome to work with me—I’m always open to improvement and collaboration! My contact details are on the cover.

I don’t know, maybe you didn’t understand me - i don’t expect from ver0.3 to have the same effect as a AAA project! I just shared my view of your project, told you what is a plus and what is a minus for me, that’s all!
I created a page on the subscriber a long time ago, but it was never confirmed, i’m doing something a little different, if you "suddenly need advice", you can ask me in a PM.

So far the verdict for me is that i want to see a continuation and see where the story goes, the wife model is cool - you just take any criticism too negatively!

 

[Deathlord764]

Are you sure this is how you want to spend your time—hunting for flaws in someone else’s work? I mean, out of all the things you could be doing, this is the hill you choose to die on?

Also, are you sure this is the right place for that? Because last time I checked, people come here to relax and enjoy, not to run CSI: AI Art Edition.
Also, just a quick reminder—this is only version 0.3. Why take it so seriously? It's a work in progress, not a finished masterpiece. Relax, enjoy, or just check back later when there's more to see!

Hey whats good, I just want to say that I love the AI art and was wondering what model/prompts did you use? Was this from citiv.ai? If so, how'd you generate it?

Much thanks,
a fan