Unity Destined NTR [v0.1] [Eroshyl]

[felipenavida]

I know every developer has the right to create whatever they want to based on their own preferences... but why so many of these "phone" themed games? almost every non-japanese NTR games are following this very same pattern, deliverying the same thing we've already seen before and honestly is getting quite exhausting.

 

[nanahanana]

Look. Not trying to be the tag police, but... Can we please stop putting the 'romance' tag in NTR games?

Half the erotica romance books out there are cheating based. You must be new.

 

[nanahanana]

Including NTS and love routes are fine and all, just don't replace proper NTR with NTS or something. Phone style cheating games benefit the most with hidden NTR stuff.

 

[Cupesh]

Very nice!!!

 

[Knight of True Love]

why not make a true love route ? ♥

 

[jack_hollow_boy]

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yeah, and still, I will check it hahah

 

[TapaNaKara]

Another game that doesn't have a save system. For now it isn't a problem but when the other routes get added, it will. The message system is bad, why do we need to click every word the mc says when there is just a single option? The text should roll until there is an option with choices...

About the story; honestly, adults dating for months and both had never had a kiss before? What are they, 12? I could understand they being virgin, but never kissed? And his childhood friend is such a bitch to the mc and all he does is say 'I'm sorry'...

The positive is the UI, but that's it. This game could become an ok game, so far it isn't.

 

[Jonathanbezoz2023]

It's a solid start, in terms of quality of life. Add an option where we can just skip to the next major decision or hold down ctrl like other games to skip text.

 

[TapaNaKara]

Look. Not trying to be the tag police, but... Can we please stop putting the 'romance' tag in NTR games?

Why? There is romance in most ntr games.

 

[Cajun Fox]

Thanks

 

[Havenless_]

Why? There is romance in most ntr games.

I'm talking about NTR games, not about games with optional NTR. Netorare is about corruption, not romance.

This game, as per dev said, is an NTR game that MIGHT or not MIGHT get a vanilla route. At least until that happens, the romance tag here is wrong.

This is an NTR game first and foremost, and as such, I would not recommend playing it if that's not your thing. As of v0.1, there's only very minor NTR themed content, and future releases might feature NTS, and love routes for your relationship. Even so, without spoiling much, the future is mostly dark, and humiliating for the MC, so you have been warned.

 

[JohnDonTroll]

Phone games are just a genre like FPS now. I guess Phone based text games are easier to develop compared to traditional image heavy games since the CG might be limited. But developers should explore text based which we get on HTML like Inner empire. As long as the writing is good it doesn't matter.

 

[recking1209]

Please don’t rush Lily’s corruption or character shift. Her current personality is one of the strongest parts of the game, and it deserves a slow, believable progression. Let her change gradually, through emotions, conflicts, and meaningful interactions, not sudden extremes.

 

[BushedBear]

I'm talking about NTR games, not about games with optional NTR. Netorare is about corruption, not romance.

This game, as per dev said, is an NTR game that MIGHT or not MIGHT get a vanilla route. At least until that happens, the romance tag here is wrong.

I think this only makes sense if you view romance as a kink rather than an intricate part of relationships in general. I don't know about you but most NTR i've experienced definitely have romance mixed in it's part of what makes the NTR feel like NTR rather than your hook-up having a fling elsewhere which doesn't give you that NTR feeling.

 

[Warsteel]

Why? There is romance in most ntr games.

LOL

 

[eroshyl]

animated ?

not right now! but i'm working on it! might debut a couple with the next chapter.

Clunky interface. For some reason I can't click and drag the slide to open bar, I have to click on the button, then click on the end of the bar.
"Storage" doesn't seem to open anything for me, so I can't save or load.
The fast button isn't very fast, and skip turns off as soon as you hit one of the countless flavor choices, so it's not very useful. This would be such a nightmare to replay to see alternative choices or just re-live some of the events in the story.

The choice are scaring me with possibilities. Big red highlighting CHOICE ( ! ) I'll pick you up, or I have work... >I have work.
"No way, you're picking me up or I'm not going!"
"Haha okay I'll be there"
oh so it didn't really do much.
CHOICE Grace is still hiring if you want it...
"Nah"
oh
Well the other one I can understand, but why is that a big red choice option?

The guy uses too many elipses and too many direct replies, he's a bit off.

Anyway. My kingdom, my kingdom, for a cute virgin gf that cheats! And to get away from Evelyn because she's not my girlfriend, isn't as focused on, and is too pushy. Like damn, a girl I barely know and am not dating is jealously trying to get my attention by getting with other guys. Jeez. Wish my girlfriend would do this.
I imagine it might actually be good if I grew up with her and a strong connection, but none of that sells in the context of the game, so I'm just annoyed at her making me use the message system more.
I think the first version does a decent job setting the stage.

I'm pretty optimistic. Though, I can't even click and drag the chat, I have to scroll wheel it, and the scrolling is ungodly slow. Hope future updates are smoother with more of those quality-of-life bits. Some of it might just be my computer being weird.

thanks so much for the feedback! i'll see about the input issues, i wasn't able to replicate those on my end so any information you can give about your setup would be great! i'm still working on a better save system, and opted to leave it out for this release. you should be able to use the storage app as you'd expect in the next version.

the story is linear after all, and as such not all choices diverge dialogue as much. they still contribute to your relationship stats like love, encouragement, and control, and lead to alternative content later in the story. some of that already happens, but it's mostly for future routes. i'll see about making those stats visible once the contacts app is completed!

Love the start, would like a way to save and skip dialogue until a decision pops up. Other than that, looking forward to the next release.

thanks!! i'm still working on some QOL changes to make replayability easier. you should be able to skip one line responses, and more in the next version!

All these AI Generated games are the same.. even the text/story images are Ai generated..
We as humans consumes this.. I think I should copy the text.. feed it back to AI so that AI can just give me a summery..
You spend hours on reading and sometimes some of the text gets repeated....
I think the DEV's of these type of games/VN should get their own web site.. For completely IA driven games.. Or get a totally separate section of this site..

it's already tagged as including AI CGs. i'm still trying to improve my writing, and none of the story or dialogue is AI generated. sorry if you didn't like it!

 

[TurboKinetics]

not right now! but i'm working on it! might debut a couple with the next chapter.


thanks so much for the feedback! i'll see about the input issues, i wasn't able to replicate those on my end so any information you can give about your setup would be great! i'm still working on a better save system, and opted to leave it out for this release. you should be able to use the storage app as you'd expect in the next version.

the story is linear after all, and as such not all choices diverge dialogue as much. they still contribute to your relationship stats like love, encouragement, and control, and lead to alternative content later in the story. some of that already happens, but it's mostly for future routes. i'll see about making those stats visible once the contacts app is completed!


thanks!! i'm still working on some QOL changes to make replayability easier. you should be able to skip one line responses, and more in the next version!


it's already tagged as including AI CGs. i'm still trying to improve my writing, and none of the story or dialogue is AI generated. sorry if you didn't like it!

Should we assume humiliation will not be optional?

 

[eroshyl]

game story its nice but clicking point is so troublesome i think it should change ui or allowed to click enter or numbers on selection

oooh i didn't think about that! i'll see about adding keyboard controls for choices.

The messages are jumping as reply window collapses, so annoying.
Other than that it was rather good so far.
I liked the backstory of the characters and the brief character exposition.
Ill be waiting for tech updates and would be interesting to see the next steps in the story of Lily

thank you! i'll see if i can do something about the UI, it's difficult with how many choices and text it supports.

Another game that doesn't have a save system. For now it isn't a problem but when the other routes get added, it will. The message system is bad, why do we need to click every word the mc says when there is just a single option? The text should roll until there is an option with choices...

About the story; honestly, adults dating for months and both had never had a kiss before? What are they, 12? I could understand they being virgin, but never kissed? And his childhood friend is such a bitch to the mc and all he does is say 'I'm sorry'...

The positive is the UI, but that's it. This game could become an ok game, so far it isn't.

thanks for the feedback! i addressed some of the issues already, and as for the story i'm doing my best to improve!! all i can say is there's more backstory to come which might answer your questions!

Please don’t rush Lily’s corruption or character shift. Her current personality is one of the strongest parts of the game, and it deserves a slow, believable progression. Let her change gradually, through emotions, conflicts, and meaningful interactions, not sudden extremes.

Should we assume humiliation will not be optional?

um sadly it won't be optional. maybe just with what ending you get.

 

[uwugaiuwu123]

built-in gallery unlocker could be awesome Mr. Dev. It takes long time to end the story and it is frustrating to play all game and routes again to unlock other images. Game is really cool btw. Thx for good work. eroshyl

 

[TurboKinetics]

um sadly it won't be optional. maybe just with what ending you get.

Sounds like hard humiliation as well, wish you luck but ill have to pass then. I dont mind a little teasing but its gonna be too much for my tastes. Shame too cause the art looks good