Three stars, because I think the game has a BIG potential, but it does not really deliver on that part. (2 stars for the current game, one extra because I really think it can be improved and has potential)
I have not played until the End of the RenPy-Version, but the overall feel is: Idea is good, excecution not so much.
First of all, I like her character design. She looks good and easily the most beautiful character in the game. Good work on that one!
Personally, I would say some things are good. Like the general corruption and humilation, this is fine. I also wish there would be more body modification, like Implants - the scenes where her breasts grew were really cool, something permanent would be nice.
The themes are overall alright.
However, two things are really bothering me:
- The stupidity of the MC. It is far too easy to fool her, like, there was this person who was always doing bad things to her and she keeps trusting them. Also, there is no fight back at all, everyone can just have their way with her and there is nothing she actually does against it. Not even really trying. And she was a top student and yet acts like a helpless child.
- This is a bit combined with the first point, but I am really missing some "wins" for her. I play this game for humilation and corruption, but I cannot avoid feeling really sorry for her. There is almost nothing positive happening, she gets shit on, humilated and does not do anything bad which would justify it. And if there are positive things or nice characters, they get ruined. Like Monica, who also suffers through Jen. Why even let her be a supportive character in the first place?
But the biggest fuck up was with Keith. There is that one guy who can actually help her and she hears a made-up story and hates Keith afterwards. This just does not make sense, and again - the stupidity of the MC.
So yeah, I would really wish for at least some positive things happening to her. Humilating her should be the goal, and this is fine. But it should not be miserable.
I have not played until the End of the RenPy-Version, but the overall feel is: Idea is good, excecution not so much.
First of all, I like her character design. She looks good and easily the most beautiful character in the game. Good work on that one!
Personally, I would say some things are good. Like the general corruption and humilation, this is fine. I also wish there would be more body modification, like Implants - the scenes where her breasts grew were really cool, something permanent would be nice.
The themes are overall alright.
However, two things are really bothering me:
- The stupidity of the MC. It is far too easy to fool her, like, there was this person who was always doing bad things to her and she keeps trusting them. Also, there is no fight back at all, everyone can just have their way with her and there is nothing she actually does against it. Not even really trying. And she was a top student and yet acts like a helpless child.
- This is a bit combined with the first point, but I am really missing some "wins" for her. I play this game for humilation and corruption, but I cannot avoid feeling really sorry for her. There is almost nothing positive happening, she gets shit on, humilated and does not do anything bad which would justify it. And if there are positive things or nice characters, they get ruined. Like Monica, who also suffers through Jen. Why even let her be a supportive character in the first place?
But the biggest fuck up was with Keith. There is that one guy who can actually help her and she hears a made-up story and hates Keith afterwards. This just does not make sense, and again - the stupidity of the MC.
So yeah, I would really wish for at least some positive things happening to her. Humilating her should be the goal, and this is fine. But it should not be miserable.