Collection - Ren'Py - Discreen Vision Game Collection [Ch. 3 Day 25 v1.1] [Discreen Vision]

You should save your time. Virtually all of the games by this developer in this thread can be described with identical wording, so this review is, at time of posting, a catch-all.

Gorgeous art. I mean, truly great retro American animation artstyle you just don't see much of. These are terrible games that really would get a 1 star from most other artists, but I have to acknowledge how smooth and unique the characters are. The animations could use a few more frames but are quite good. This is an example of an artist hamstrung by a previous bad team experience who now refuses to work with others and it breaks my heart because a proper team or partner to prop this guy's work up would do gangbusters!

Awful English. This is some of the worst English I've seen outside of machine translation. There is zero eroticism and only enough punctuation and grammar to gleam the simplest of intended meanings. I have no idea what level of writing this guy is capable of because it's being bottlenecked by one of the infinite-minus-one monkeys that didn't write Shakespeare. It feels like every bit of text on screen was spoken by a foreign tourist asking for directions with their translation app open in their hand.

Tedious gameplay. What little "game" these feature tends to be extremely simple, misunderstood iterations of game systems you'd see better from an afternoon highschool game jam. There really is very little about these that even classifies as "game" outside of clicking through the renpy text boxes, and when you do get to play something, it's designed to be tedious to pad out for time. The gameplay elements feel like busywork rather than fun. For most games I'd say something like it "gets in the way of x" but in this case the x is borderline incomprehensible words connected in a way I think is supposed to be English.

Dig up an art dump of this guy's incredible work and pass on these brief episodes in frustration.

Update: I unfortunately must lower the rating to a 2. While the art itself is amazing it suffers from a poor game experience. While the art if being reviewed would be a four or more, the overall game play is not enjoyable or streamlined enough and creates a below average play experience. This would have been a stellar adult comic but it is a lackluster game so far.
Quality sexy art style by a great adult artist but the game play is lacking and some of these are lacking any real content as well... if a designer is doing this many at once, and they're lacking content, I have real concerns how much will get added being split so many ways. Also not sure I'm a fan of these as a 'collection', would have preferred them reviewable as individual games, at least one of them is a 1 and another is maybe a 4 so, some of this is averaging.
Know that the majority of the 3 stars is for the art and for hoping for (lots) more of it. If going off just game play this would be lower.

This is a review for if you do since this thread has many games
Jesus christ never have i had a game piss me off more than this one.
if you enjoy watching a resource bar go up then down then up again then this is the game for you.
to summarise the "gameplay" its cookie clicker without the option to turn on a auto-clicker to skip past the early grind you cant even save edit this game or do the tried and true method of waiting and doing something else while your waiting because when that asshole king talks to you to take some more of your shit you have to read the riveting dialogue and click through it and save editing the game break all of the triggers for this game. so you cant even skip past the bullshit to get to the few scenes this game does have.

Quite frankly the only reason this devs games are worth playing at all is the art style its unique and pretty damn good but the retarded plots, terrible 2000 tier armour game point and click puzzle logic and now in this game god awful grind it becomes just not worth playing through.

TLDR If someone can do a CGrip i will baptise you a saint otherwise its not worth it dear lord